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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m soooo enjoying this!
I think all your stories are fantastic, and I really hope you continue with this one and Why Bother? I was really enjoying that one, but I can tell you\'re not really sure about it.
Please update soon!
I think all your stories are fantastic, and I really hope you continue with this one and Why Bother? I was really enjoying that one, but I can tell you\'re not really sure about it.
Please update soon!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you are still doing your thing and you are doing it well. I love Peter and how he fits into the whole story. Michelle is finally doing things right. Janette maybe has finally got the point and Marcus is still the man. Yo, tirch you the man too. just keep doing your thing and I\'ll do mines
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what do you mean, not enough angst yet? Are you planning on torturing us some more? Serioulsy, this chapter was sweet and romantic, just what they need.
I like how you portayed Janette, it sounds really realistic. Poor girl.
Dare I hope seeing Catherine in this story?
I like how you portayed Janette, it sounds really realistic. Poor girl.
Dare I hope seeing Catherine in this story?
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a very well done explanation by marcus, and i\'m glad that pete believed him. i like how michelle is cool with younger kids, just not guys her age. and the mini-romance is adorable.
man, is janelle gonna be a source of conflict? that could be interesting.
thank you!
man, is janelle gonna be a source of conflict? that could be interesting.
thank you!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good progress. So now Marcus has to see himself with Pete\'s eyes too. I think it could do him some good if ever something happens with Michelle. Kind of keeping him on his toes, because he would both hurt Michelle and Peter.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story lots of twists and turns i like michelle a lot she kind of reminds me of a girl i went to school with.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!! my birthday is may 9th!
nice chapter
update!
yea
nice chapter
update!
yea
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey u deleted that message thing at the bottom of the story b4 i could read it!!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do please continue. the angst of the whole janette situation is killing me but i am willing to wait to see how it plays out in time. In the meantime...the tony/sean couple...so cute. lol. keep it up can\'t wait to see how the war with luke with explode.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im sorry but janette pisses me off. i really dont like her, and marcus sucks major for fucking her.
janette better not try and get marcus, or make michelle jealous! please update!
janette better not try and get marcus, or make michelle jealous! please update!