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for You Don't Know Me

by Tirch

person Anon
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling Seamus is going to be interfering in Marcus and Michelle\'s relationship. My bias impression of Seamus is that he knows his ways around with the ladies and if a woman is not married she is not off limits. Please don’t make Michelle fall for Seamus. I really like Marcus and Michelle together. Thanks for updating.
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story has gotten boring.
person dede
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seamus reminds me of colin farrell...he is so cute! and please keep him away from janette!
i dont care, i dont like her...
person anono
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i hope michelle doesn\'t fuck up her relationship. cuz the worst thing anyone can ever feel is regret, and she is no doubt going to feel that if things go wrong with marcus because of her \"crush.\"
person TAYE
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OooooooooooooHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Marcus might just be the one to be played this time. Look at Michelle now, Marcus gave her alittle confidence and she is going to use it with someone else. maybe he should have been with Janette aleast she was more upfront. I just can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Now the link might just be broken. Seamus and michelle? does that sound better then Marcus and michelle?
person cariad
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems like Marcus has to watch out for Seamus. He realy should visit Michelle\'s wrok place soon.

Also I like how he matured since the 1rst time we \"saw\" him. He has now responsabilities he takes erioulsy and a serious girlfriend (not that Cath wasn\'t serious but I think you got it).
person fili
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh. oh.
as much as i approve of irish people, NO.
can\'t we set up the horny irish bugger with janette?
anyway, thank you for the chapter!
person fili
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, poor horny teenagers. aw, poor marcus having to be an authority figure. *snickers*
i will say, i actually don\'t hate janette. she\'s kinda redeemed herself from the side-character skank she seemed, and is now cool.
thank you!
person cariad
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is not that I hate Janette per say, but she\'s sometime a pain in the ass with Marcus when she can\'t take no for a answer, and well we\'re taking side with Marcus and Michelle here since they are the hero. It is only normal. But what she did in the last chapter shows that she\'s a not bad, not everyone would have interfere there
person JeremySumpter
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now start writing the next chapter!