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Chapter 13 and 14 is good. Janette and Seamus together good idea. Oh no, the debacle with Luke is not over yet. I don’t know why I didn’t mention this before but I also like the relationship between Peter and Marcus. Instead of having Marcus explain how he has changed you bring in a character like Peter to show us how responsible and mature Marcus has become. It’s good that you gave Michelle some doubts about her relationship with Marcus because it ties in with her self-esteem issues. I also like how certain problems in your story don’t linger on forever or for things to be too dramatic to make the characters realize how much they love each other. Thanks for updating.

sorry i read that big review someone gave you
and i kinda agree with some points.
the story kinda is confusing with
all the people and it does \"change direction\" a lot
i do love marcus and michelle though...

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Janette and Seamus should not be together!!! Come on! Just because they are the only single characters!? Please, do this one thing for me, please?

my respect for jannette has increased tenfold in this chapter. esp. because she\'s goin\' after seamus.
and my love of all irishmen has been restored as well. thank god seamus understands boundaries, and doesn\'t cross \'em.
and that was the best way ever to fix the \'problem\' for michelle and marcus. best way-- straightforward, honest, best. throughourly approve.

thank you!!

i like the content of this story. it doesn\'t have full blown love triangles, jealous exes, and most of all infidelity. i swear all the stories i\'ve read have had these characteristics. it was nice at first but after the first few you grow tired of them and wish for something different. it\'s always someone cheating on their partner with a vicious third party leading to a bunch of drama and angst. of course pure sweet and fluffy stories with no drama whatsoever would be boring, but you\'re story isn\'t like that...it\'s more like a good buildup of the relationship between marcus and michelle. i hope you don\'t decide to bring in all those factors...this story is great just the way it is.

wow...i have almost given up on this. its gotten boring because u promise drama, and then u foreshadow it, and then u stop it b4 its starts. and please! u didnt mean for janette to be a ho or cause problems with marcus and michelle? yeah right, but u stoped that before it happend. why include marcus and janette having sex? its no relevance if its not needed later, and when it cam up later u brush it off! and michelle is a horrible character! u say she is so self consious and low self esteem with thinking she\'ll be replaced concerning marcus, then when he tells her he slept with janette after sleeping with her, she\'s like \'oh thats cool, good for u\'. janette is a ho, i dont care if shes a consenting adult, she\'s still a slut. she is not a victim! now shes here to save the day for everyone. And then the whole peter thing is not needed. there is already a side story with sean and tony, we dont need peter and moira\'s story. there are more and more characters being introduced, too many to keep atrack of. too many stroylines. we have marcus/michelle; peter/moira; sean/tony lve story; sean/tony/luke anger story; brigite/tom?; janette and now seamus! and u stopped seamus/michelle/marcus drama before that could began. i mean, where are u going with this story?! its getting boring means u are writing the same stuff over and over where even the sex scenes seem the same! honestly, im not trying to rip u a new one here, cause i LOVED your other stories, but this one is going in a million directions! i mean u ask whats wrong with the piece, and here\'s what bothering this reader.

Fair enough.

hey i like your story because it is all that and a bag of chips with some dip on the side. lol
i agree with ur message it all, but you dont have to change anything because we dont like it remember this is your stroy and i will read it no matter what happens even if michelle had an affair or not.

oh, thank god we\'ve got that figured out. sean deserves a hug. i was so bloody worried there for a moment; marcus and michelle NEED to BE TOGETHER. FOREVER.
bah.
bad seamus, flirting with taken ladies. bad irishman, down boy.

thank you!

yeah, talking to Marcus is good. I also hope it will be enough