rate_review Reviews

I was so happy to see this story updated. I don’t know why people are not feeling this story except for a few of us. You know what I admire you as an author because you take criticism pretty well. Chapter 15 is a shocker with Peter’s confession and Janette being in a hospital. That was a good cliffhanger. I can’t wait to read what had happened at Janette and Alex’s meeting. Thanks for updating.

hey can you please update. I know you are writing \"why bother\" now, but can you bring back marcus and michelle, the people miss them. Much love. Write soon

Hi there: Any chance we got a new chapter soon?

When are you going to write more?

In that last sentece of chapter 15 (I think), \"She wouldn’t be INTIMATED by Luke at all, she promised herself.\"
Um, intimated might not be a word, but INTIMIDATED is. ^.^
Sorry, just though you might like to know so you can fix.

I\'m loving this story! However, I would personally like to see some different sex scenes. In my head, Marcus is hot, I would love to see his kinky side lol.

I didn\'t think Janette was a ho. In fact I felt quite sorry for her...

Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

hey everytime i read the reviews someone is doggin the story, but the point is that it is Tirch\'s story and he can write it anyway he wants too. I love the story. it is great and it has more to it then just sex. most people just write about sex all day then the end, but your characters actually have a realationship. so keep writing and i\'ll keep reading ,even the hater\'s are going to keep reading so they can hate some more. The next review they will say you had to many spaces in the story and that messed it up for them. just forget about them. Cause you have a fan in me. peace out

hm, i love this story, but there\'s been something a little bit off about it to me the whole way through, and i think i know what it is. the luke thread. i\'m not disturbed by it, the way im sure you want your audience to be. it isn\'t the homophobia that is taking away from the reality- its a very real and relevant subject, you\'re very bold to take it on. but the flat feel of the whole situation w/ janette trying to repent, luke being spiteful the entire way through, it\'s all just way too- obvious, and, well, i hate to say flat again, but flat, in a very three dimensional world you\'ve created. now that it\'s begun you may as well see it through, but honestly, that\'s where the problem for me as a fellow author is, and as the best friend of someone who was attacked due to their sexuality. in the future, when you plan to deal with subjects such as these, you should think more about making it as real as possible. it\'s tough, but it\'s a challenge i think you should take.
great additions, by the way.

I\'m up to chapter six, but I just have to review... this is amazing writing! Real plot, believable characters, romance... with people who act like idiots, as people in love always seem to do. Its brilliant. Your one of the best writers on this website. I\'m adding you to my recommended reading tomorrow.

I\'m only up to chapter 6 because i\'m rationing it out acouple a day... far too good to rush through.

Great story so far. Really like how Marcus has grown. He is ever patient with Michelle and her self esteem, could be a testament to his sobriety or just his personality before the Catherine years. His resolve seems a bit too strong, he could have relapsed a bit in the beginning before he and Michelle got serious but not now. He really has nothing to prove to anyone anymore, just that he remains Marcus. As for the other characters, I feel that the tension between Seamus and Michelle was resolved too quickly as Seamus could have tempted her more when he saw he was getting to her. Janette seems like a cool character and would love to see her truly tested during the Sean-Luke trial. Maybe creating tension between Michelle and Marcus as he remains a strong friend he is. Some old demons would be nice: Michelle and her self esteem, Peter and his parents or maybe Maura break up. Catherine and Batey visit would be interesting also.