rate_review Reviews

I love this story!!!! ONLY 2 CHapters left?! I hope it ends happily.... Is there going to be an epilogue? or a sequel? I would LOVE that. To all those readers that gave up on this story, they\'re missing out.

Waiting impatiently for the next 2 chapters

Btw I didn\'t appreciate Marcus\' behaviour

I would just like to say that I really like you stories, including this one, it may not be as good as the others but I still think that its really good. Keep writing, and I\'ll keep following.

Talk about drama this chapter was full of it. Peter just has one surprise after another. As for the chapter it is not crappy at all. I really like how you have portrayed Marcus and Michelle. Thanks for updating.

hmm, a lot happened here. At least Janette is not looking that bad, and she has Seamus.

Now bring the next chaptre soon, so I can begin to read your other story.

... Youre a crazy man Tirch... a crazy crazy man. How in the world do you call that chapter shitty? It was what the story needed!!! A little time to slow down and put all the characters and their situations into perspective, and it did a damned good job of that! Keep it up.

man, you know that alex kid was lying...
oh, poor janette. such a smart move, that went so terribly wrong. upside-- seamus will now be hovering, although i doubt the guilt complex will be such a good thing.
and it\'s so sad that both marcus and michelle think they\'re bad luck. c\'mon guys, you\'re all together, \'s ok!

thank you!

... Wow. I\'ve spent most of today reading this fic and it is my favorite of yours BY FAR now. I thought at first that you couldn\'t beat \"Why Bother\" (yea, Im getting better on the names:) ), but... something about the direction you took in that just didnt appeal to me as much. This fic, however, is filled with much more emotion. I cant help but FEEL for the characters in their various situations. My only complaint is that the story is so startlingly realistic... it is frightening because things like this can, and do, happen. My other complaint would fall in line with a complaint I had earlier, and that is that the characters lose their naivete too quickly... I would love to see Michelle be more insecure about her feelings and turn cold for once... You did a good job of bringing that out in the jealousy part with Seamus... but she just seems a little too bubly for now.

WOW!! You can\'t leave us hanging like this!!! Please update soon!!!

Well I\'mnot worried about Peter and Maura, but for Janette, it is very bad. I can\'t believe they used her that way with this lie. Or maybe it wsan\'t a lie and Luke heard about the meeting. gah

Thanks for updating