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Nice ending. \"Michelle reached over and placed her hand on top of Marcus’s, which was resting on the gearshift, and squeezed it lightly. “Friends,” she replied.\"
It says a lot by a simple gesture...........to me, it means everything is going to be all right.

NOOOO you cant end it like this!!! that was so unbelievably SAD! i still have tears running down my cheeks... then again im just a sook and a hopeless romantic. Why couldnt you have just left them happy and smiling instead of breaking them up? :( i really enjoyed reading this story and i really do feel upset for both marcus and michelle (eventhough they are just characters LOL) keep writting, you have this way of writting that pulls everyone into the storyline and makes them feel every emotion that your characters go through :) keep up the good work
-bree :)

Well I have to confess I hoped for a make up. But you managed to get the perfect spirit and rythm for this chapter.

Besides it all looks hopeful. For everyone. So I can\'t be disapointed with it. In fact it is quite the opposite.

Thank you for this story. Now I\'m finaly on my read to read your more recent ones hehe

Aw! You are a VERY talented writer! I loved this story, it was great, very VERY sad at the ending but I still loved it and I can\'t wait till the epilogue comes up. Again, incredible, incredible story! Please keep up with your writing.

Ouch. Are you really letting her moce to California without him? I hope not.

Marcus can be grateful to have such friends, because he did 3 very big mistakes in less than 24 hours. I wanted to give him a little shake.

Now we saw Marcus\'s side of the after-break-up, but I also wonder how Michelle felt there, and why she didn\'t allow him to speak at the wedding

I say it again... oh you bastard! *Laughs* Great chapter... really really good chapter... Marcus changed to better for about a paragraph and a half, which threw me off the three or four times I read that single part... but thats ok:) Great story... kind of scary at the resemblance to my own situation, which probably makes me appreciate the story even more. Way to go man!

Chapter 17 was intense. Chapter 18 is sweet, sad and moving. Chapter 18 is brilliant because I’m not even mad that they broke up. You actually made the break up made sense for some reason. This is actually going to be the first story that you’re going to put an epilogue in which I find it totally awesome of you to do. Thanks for updating.

Oh you bastard! *laughs* I\'ve said it before and I\'ll say it again, this is still your best story. There were a few more grammatical mistakes in this chapter, but that is ok. I can\'t exactly say I like the direction this is going, but I definately like the story in general. Keep it up!

OMG! Leave us hanging there! I love it, I\'ve loved the story right from the get go and I can\'t wait for the next 2 chapters. I hope Marcus and Michelle work it out, and she can get him to open up and get through to him! I\'ll be waiting for chapter 18!

Only two more chapters left? WAHHH!!! *gonk*
I like your writing a lot, your plots are excellent!
I hope everything works out for them...and that the first thing that happens in the next chapter is that Marcus puts down that bottle of vodka before he drinks any of it. Or Michelle suddenly calls him. Or he tastes it and hates the flavor. Or something like that...
Whatever, keep it up.