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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story, your style of writing is very mature and I think alot of people can relate to it. Well done and update soon!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
On another story I see. I like how it is turning out. They seem to make progress, that\'s a good beginning. Now I just hope she won\'t find about Janette, she needs to be more sure of her feelings and of him before facing that.
Btw are we going to see Catherine in this story? I think it would be a good idea
Btw are we going to see Catherine in this story? I think it would be a good idea
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW!!!!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im loving this story. but please dont have catherine make an appearance. i think ive had my fill of her and her story, and i dont think we need to get into the past of marcus and catherine again.
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing...& u said u didn\'t know what to write next. chapter 4 was so moving, i really felt emotional afterwards. it completely drew me in, amazing work so please continue!! update soon!!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story - ur dialogue is fantastic and really adds to the story. I can\'t wait for Marcus and Michelle to get together! Update soon!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 and 3 is moving along nicely. I really like Sean and Tony together. I think they’re cute. I am glad your making Marcus work hard for Michelle’s attention. This is crazy but I am reviewing this at 1:00 in the morning but a tiny part of me wants Marcus and Catherine together again. I don’t know why I can’t explain it. She could pick a college in New York somewhere and they meet. I know I think I am insane myself. Thanks for updating.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well mate, we meet again it seems? =)
Another quality piece from you. You\'ve really discovered and incorporated your own style into this right from the start, as this is one of the few, apart from Starting Over (to some extent) where the start has been solid and continued through, you\'re getting better at this. =P
No visible spelling errors, if you proof read this yourself, then you\'re pretty damn good and I applaud you. I also think that the whole Marcus spin-off thing was a quality idea, as there were many things left unsaid about Marcus and how he turned out, even though he played such an important role in Starting Over. I hope you keep up the good work on this and keep those updates nice and steady, I\'ll be following this closely. ^_^
- Micah.
Another quality piece from you. You\'ve really discovered and incorporated your own style into this right from the start, as this is one of the few, apart from Starting Over (to some extent) where the start has been solid and continued through, you\'re getting better at this. =P
No visible spelling errors, if you proof read this yourself, then you\'re pretty damn good and I applaud you. I also think that the whole Marcus spin-off thing was a quality idea, as there were many things left unsaid about Marcus and how he turned out, even though he played such an important role in Starting Over. I hope you keep up the good work on this and keep those updates nice and steady, I\'ll be following this closely. ^_^
- Micah.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a brill idea to do a spin off on Marcus as I think he\'s a really interesting character. I have to say, I absolutley love all your stories. Keep going!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start and I agree on what you said about believing in people’s ability to change and in the power of redemption. I think writing about Marcus will be a good challenge for you since some people have already formed an opinion of him. Oh, I almost forgot to mention somewhere in your story you put the name Ben instead of Marcus. Thanks.