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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::laughs merrily:: I like this fic! Tee hee, I hope you post more soon!
Jayden is cool. I like that he doesn\'t fall for the seduction so easily. ^^
Jayden is cool. I like that he doesn\'t fall for the seduction so easily. ^^
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Damean go!! I love this guy... can\'t wait to see what he does to poor Jayden.
I\'m currently writing a story that involves succubi, but they won\'t be this detailed. And hey, did you know that \"Zach\" means \"The Lord remembers?\" Maybe Zach can try to illicit help from the big guy upstairs to save his friend... just a thought :)
ps: yay for Damean!
I\'m currently writing a story that involves succubi, but they won\'t be this detailed. And hey, did you know that \"Zach\" means \"The Lord remembers?\" Maybe Zach can try to illicit help from the big guy upstairs to save his friend... just a thought :)
ps: yay for Damean!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t know that. I just picked it randomly. That\'s so cool! That would be cool if he did that....*ponders* ;)
In the version I\'m turning in for class it had Zach really into the occult, which explains why Jayden knows so much. And it has a surprise ending. I might change it for this one, though! ;) I\'m glad you like it! And thanks so much for reviewing, Kai! I LOVE your stories, so to know you like mine....*squeals*
Okie. I\'m done. Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing! It\'s better than cookies!!
**Zeph**
In the version I\'m turning in for class it had Zach really into the occult, which explains why Jayden knows so much. And it has a surprise ending. I might change it for this one, though! ;) I\'m glad you like it! And thanks so much for reviewing, Kai! I LOVE your stories, so to know you like mine....*squeals*
Okie. I\'m done. Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing! It\'s better than cookies!!
**Zeph**
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heres a suggestion...they both fall deeply in love and live happily ever after!!!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey all! Thanks for reading and reviewing my first fic! This was originally a project for my Fiction Writing class, but I\'m going to add in a bunch of scenes and chapters with Jayden and Damean. Maybe a lemon or two, if I feel so inspired. ;) Please, keep reviewing! It makes my day and makes me want to update faster so I can get more reviews!
Thanks for the suggestion, Anon! ;) I know how this thing is going to end and I know most of the major happenings, but it\'s the small things in between I\'m working on. Maybe a succubus (sp?) later....? We\'ll just have to wait and see!
Thanks for reading!!
**Zephyr**
Thanks for the suggestion, Anon! ;) I know how this thing is going to end and I know most of the major happenings, but it\'s the small things in between I\'m working on. Maybe a succubus (sp?) later....? We\'ll just have to wait and see!
Thanks for reading!!
**Zephyr**
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazingly well written ^__^
I love it~! Can\'t wait for more.
-Kira
I love it~! Can\'t wait for more.
-Kira
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long live incubus stories! I\'m loving it so far. Update soon!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I`d like to see more of this fic. Please update soon.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh more more more :)
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, this got me from the summary and I\'m desparate to see what happens. So cruel to stop right after Dameon appears! Please please write more!