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for Incubus

by GentleBreeze

person madlodger
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Zephyr. I thought you mentioned an update? And what most of the story is sort of done? What happened, are you OK? If you are alife out there then I wish that you updated, I mean, It is a wonderfull story and it is a shame to waist it. Did your presentation go bad and they criticized your story? Well, doom on them! I want my update! Please!
person Kikvws
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so freaking goooood! Update soon please!
person Sarah jo
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im sure youll do fine. and if they rip it to shreds skew them and there close mindedness. ^_^ I think the story is great and cant wait for a real update. dont worry im not in any hurry for i have found that it is better to wait for a good chapter and to hurry the author for a not done chapter. anyway cant wait and good luck (even if it already happened, i hope it went well and that they gave *constructive* critisim (sp?) and not flames.
wuv peaches
person Eve
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I can\'t wait for you to update.
person Kira-Puff
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Hun. Good luck! Hope everything goes well for you! =D And I can\'t wait for the *real* update! *insert more words of encuragement here*

-Kira
person Carrot
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I can\'t wait till you finish this! It\'s so awesome so far! I can\'t WAIT! ^.^
person Eci_Frog
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please. I really like this story.
person Kira-Puff
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far x3! Can\'t wait for the next update =D
person janette
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far it\'s very good. Daemon is quite charming and seductive and I like Jayden.
Looking forward to more.
person Apollo
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'d seen that you a) joined both my beta group AND my update list and b) reviewed my story, so I had to check out yours!

It is interesting! I\'ve never been drawn by the whole demon thing, but it works. I\'m hooked! I can\'t wait to read more and see what happens!

As for writers block, that I can understand, I\'ve been there a time or two...that\'s why there are only 13 chapters in what, 3+ months! Meep! LoL, here\'s hoping you can break that wall down and update soon!

Apollo

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