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You are kind of a mean author...I mean, the ending to the prom chapter made me want to cry...and I wouldn\'t have thought too much about the end of this chapter, except you had to go and say it would be all \'dun dun DUN!\' Really, do you have to tease so? You foreshadow well enough to get me all anxious without having to add anything to it...Not to mention that terribly ambiguous A/N. I have some of it right and some of it not right? Just mean, I tell you ^_^

Loved the chapters though! I sooo knew Jake was showing up for Homecoming. I was reading all fast to get to the part where he showed up, hehehehe. Although I didn\'t think that Joanne would go with him, but I\'m glad she did. It was nice to know that the Reynolds got their lives back together, but with Mr. R getting out I don\'t even want to imagine the tragedy that is coming. I have a feeling you are going to make me cry...more. I\'m so looking forward to the conclusion of this! ^_^

Oh god.... that was such a sweet chapter! But what is going to happen next??? Something bad i take it since they arent together when she\'s in college.... but what?? i just have to know!

here you took me by surprise O_O I thought i was dreaming when i saw 2 more chapters, honest!!
They are so cute *___*

Same as always you\'re a great writer, i absolutly love you! too bad there\'s only 3 chapters left ;_;
Will you write a sequel or something? (depend on the end of course)

Well so far so good!!

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This is one of the best story\'s I have read so far. Hope U Continue to write great story\'s like this one. Can wait to U post the remaining chapters.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! get back together damit u idiots! see a therapist and admit jo and mark were right ! i know u still love them! /cries! they were so perfect.....seriously...tho...if u end up killing them off or make it so they never get back together, for this \"deeper meaning crap\" im going to hunt u down and beat u with a pillow for an hour.

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Awesome chapter.

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WEHRE THE HELL IS ORIGINAL SIN, U LIED! (i will be updated sin every 2 days) LIAR! /slap!

*le gasp*

i could practically TASTE that \"dun dun duuuuun\"

make it yummy..the next chappie that is...i bet eve dies...why does she have to die?? why can\'t she live??? like...in bermuda...with amnesia

and jake could join the military

ooh oooh and joanne could like...do something trippy and go to college and reminesce and stuff

Aaw, this is such a heart-breaking story. The characters, the dialogue, the situations, everything. I love it. I actually cried at the last couple of chapters you\'ve put up, which is a feat for me when it comes to reading stories. This is definitely the mark of a great writer - to be able to make the reader get so caught up in the characters and actually feel like they\'re real people, going through real life dilemmas. Well done! Can\'t wait for the rest of the chapters :)

Ok, now Jake and Eve are just being stubborn brats. Completely nuerotic (not unlike myself) brats. Why can\'t they get back together now? Why? Ok, so everything could have been bad. But, It. Was. Not! Can\'t they see that? Are they blind? I\'ve heard of blinded by love, but never blinded by stubborness! And some questions, which I\'m pretty sure you may not answer but yeah...
1) Does Jake and Eve being adopted have to do with the storyline?
2)Am I wishing too much for a fairy tale ending?
3)Will the reason Jake wasn\'t mentioned in the first chapter where Eve was come out in the end?
4)Can I see any outline or notes you\'ve got on this, because it\'s killing me (not to mention poor Foamyfan who has to put up with my nuerotic self every time you update)?

Okay, okay, that last one is withdrawn. But lovely chapter, even if they are stubborn brats.

Well, you made one tiny typo in there. Jake adressed Joanne\'s mother as \"Mrs. Reynolds.\" That\'s his last name! ^_^

Great chapter. . but don\'t tell me it\'s gonna go back downhill again! Your mention of omnious music scares me xD If any story should have omnious music, it\'s mine (Poor Osamu. . I\'m gonna torture him so much :P).

Anyway, I shall stop babbling :D Update soon, yes? ^_^ *is hyper and sorry she\'s not shutting up*

Keep it up :D

Sphynx

OMG o.o You\'ve broken them up AGAIN?! And this time probably for good? Oh, don\'t let this end on a sad note and have her end up with Mark. Not that there is anything wrong with Mark, he\'s a good guy. . .it\'s just. . . her and Jake. They\'re great together, ya know? I\'m waiting for the next chap already. This one was just heart-wrenching T.T

Sphyhx