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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But where is Jake? In the first chapter, I mean. What\'s he apologizing to Eve for? Ah! What a great update! Your chapters always leave me wanting so much more. I\'m sad that the story will soon come to an end, but I can\'t wait to see what you\'ve got planned for the end. Ugh! I\'m so emotional right now I can\'t form coherent thoughts.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you better hurry up before this hitman I am looking to hire gets to you.. Just kidding. But you better hurry up.. How dare you leave us like this!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ive been reading this story and find it absolutely amazing, but im wondering if Jake and Joanne get back together again? dont they inevitably split for good? in the first chapter, Joanne\'s talking to Laurie about dating and it seems like Jake is totally out of the picture . so does Joanne lose Jake for good eventually? Jake and Joanne are really cute together and i wonder how it would feel for the readers to read about them breaking up for good and leading separate lives. . . im curious how the story will end, does Joanne end up dating someone else and forgetting Jake or wut?
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chaper 16 review... I know, Im falling behind again!!!
I love you!!! Your character development and the amount of emotions that can apply to real life situations is incredible. This chapter has my vote for your best yet, even though it is kind of a downer;( Oh well, GREAT CHAPTER! Please dont stop writing!
“Ew! No,” Joanne exclaimed, laughing. “That would be, like, incestuous. No, no, we’re just friends.”
Love that line by the way, can definately see a lot of Eve in her.
I love you!!! Your character development and the amount of emotions that can apply to real life situations is incredible. This chapter has my vote for your best yet, even though it is kind of a downer;( Oh well, GREAT CHAPTER! Please dont stop writing!
“Ew! No,” Joanne exclaimed, laughing. “That would be, like, incestuous. No, no, we’re just friends.”
Love that line by the way, can definately see a lot of Eve in her.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Little girl shriek* I love it... I LOVE IT! PLEASE let them get back together. I like this story too much for that not to happen:) Very well written, as taht is always an awkward situation to write about without getting redundant. You, however, have much more skill than that and it is apparent in your writing. KEEP IT UP!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh cmon, u know im joking with my threats, i do it to everyone, ur a great writer, and thank u for getting jake and jo back together, please keep it that way?
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok im crying my eyes out because i think there might be a possibility that eve and or jake might die or something.. because of what was said in the very first chapter about how she had to go to a therapist over eve for half of senior year and all of freshmen year of college and homecoming usually around the halfway part of a school year... and also how she still couldnt date because of her as laurie called it \'high school heartbreak\' now i know you have it all planned out and stuff but i swear i will be so so so upset if you kill them or something... im crying right now with the thought of it.. so please please dont break my heart with this one
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s funny how you can make me fall in love with Jake, make me turn on him in an instant when he wouldn\'t forgive Joanne... then make me feel guilty for turning on him. I\'m glad they got back together but what about Eve and Mark? What\'s going to happen to them? And most importantly, WHAT HAPPENS TO EVE?
I\'m eager but nervous to read the next chapter due to the \"ominous\" fortelling. Plus it would mean this story is ending and I would greatly miss Joanne and Jake. Heck I\'m still missing Flame and Leah... Catherine and Batey... Lianna and Joseph... Marcus? I\'m not gonna lie, call me biased but after I read Starting Over, I just hate Marcus. lols... Out of all your characters, I think Jake has the most burdens and I\'d be awefully disappointed if he met the worst fate. Heck, I\'m already feeling down after re-reading the first chapter. Sigh... thanks for posting. Time for me to face something ominous of my own... Hurricane Rita!
I\'m eager but nervous to read the next chapter due to the \"ominous\" fortelling. Plus it would mean this story is ending and I would greatly miss Joanne and Jake. Heck I\'m still missing Flame and Leah... Catherine and Batey... Lianna and Joseph... Marcus? I\'m not gonna lie, call me biased but after I read Starting Over, I just hate Marcus. lols... Out of all your characters, I think Jake has the most burdens and I\'d be awefully disappointed if he met the worst fate. Heck, I\'m already feeling down after re-reading the first chapter. Sigh... thanks for posting. Time for me to face something ominous of my own... Hurricane Rita!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I want to cry, and I\'m not even sure what\'s going to happen. Does that make any sense? Something tragic for sure. Yeah, I can feel it... This story is definitely going to make me bawl. Now all I have to do is figure out who\'s gonna die... Anyway, you are so incredibly welcome. You can always look for support from me. I know firsthand how hard it can be to churn out quality work under pressure. You\'re doing a fantastic job so far. :o) Thank you for reading and reviewing my story, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it. Ok, great job, and please don\'t keep us in suspense too long. Silent Envy might have an anuerysm. lol
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the lasted chapter U posted. IT was very interesting to know if they will stay together. Keep up the great job U are doing.