rate_review Reviews

okay...i know it shouldn\'t come as a shock that eve died....but WOW- what a story....that was incredible.... :)

good chapter, though im still completly pissed u killed eve off. sigh

Oh god... I was crying!!! You made me cry! That is something that always proves to me that the story i\'m reading is truly touching and amazing and well written. I love this and yet hate it... but i want more so much.... what is mark gonna do? oh god.... more please!

Yea, you did pretty good with it. Something about the chapter before I read it screamed \"You\'ll hate me for this!\"... but thats ok:) Still a good chapter, if a little disheartening. Keep it up, and get some energy back.

You made me cry :(

I knew it was coming but I still cried, good job!!

Reviewing chapter 18, that was pretty intense. I really like how you have build up the tension and the anticipation of wanting to know what really happened. There’s a saying that goes “when it rain, it pours.” You did an excellent job in executing or leading to Eve’s death. This chapter made me so sad I don’t know what else to say or think. Take care and I hope everything with you is okay. Thanks for updating:)

O_O NOOOO EVE!!!!!!! *SNIFF SNIFF* REST IN PEACE EVE!!!!! WE WILL NEVER FORGET YOU!!!!!!!!! WHY DID EVE HAVE TO DIE!!!??? I GUESS GOD MADE IT HAPPEN FOR A REASON... TEEHEHEE. LIKE MARK AND JOANNE!!!!! WHOOT WHOOT!!! THEYRE HOT FOR EACH OTHER!!! I wish... BUT REALLY I WANT HIM TO FALL CRAZY HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH JOANNE... LIKE SHE COMES TO COMFORT HIM IN EVES DEATH AND HE CRIES IN HER ARMS AND FALLS CRAZY IN LOVE WITH HER... *sigh* BUT JAKE WILL HAVE TO WORK HARD TO GET HER BACK!!! DUN DUN DUN!!! THATS HIS OWN FAULT CAUSE HE DIDNT KNOW THAT JOANNE TOLD ABOUT HIS PROBLEM BECAUSE SHE CARED FOR HIM... *hits his head* HAHAHAH HES SOOO CUTE... BUT PLEASE... REALLY MAKE MARK FALL FOR JOANNE PLEASE!!! ANYWAY... THANK YOU FOR UPDATING THIS WONDERFUL STORY AND I\'LL BE WAITING ON MY COMPUTER SEAT UNTIL YOU UPDATE AGAIN!!!

Ok, it might be because it\'s six in the morning and I\'m really tired, but I am sobbing. That... was really sad. Not unexpected in the least, but still very sad. I... don\'t even know what to say. Fantastic job on the mood of the chapter, it fit the circumstances perfectly and everyone\'s reactions were completely believable. Now I just want to know how she died. -hugz- Great job.

oh....my....god.....you are so good at writing, makes me jealous!! I swear I was feeling as panick as Joanne when she got the phone call O_O shit i\'m almost crying ;__;

Maybe you told us in the first chapter eve would be dying but it\'s so hard to read it and to know it poor girl...I really hope Mr Reynolds (it\'s the right name?) will rot in hell >o< !! For now he is the first on my \"I hate you with all my heart\" list

see ya...

Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don\'t know why I am sad because I knew she would die, but that chapter just got to be. I was sad and angry all at one. i hope Jake kills his father. In that case I would find him not guilty. Man just when everything was going so good. Now this. Man you have to update soon. i have to know how she died. Anyway great chapter. You\'re the best