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Awww... i\'m crying, i really am. That was an amazing chapter and I just somehow knew that Jake had done something to make himself feel responsible. And poor Mark.... and everybody. You have me waiting on tip toes for this next chapter

*sniffles* I can\'t take this shit, Tirch! No more angst, no more! My head hurts from crying! But, you have done a fantastic job with this story, despite the sadness and because of it. It stands out among your other work, and is by far my favorite. Death is not an easy thing to write, I know this from experience, but you have written it flawlessly. You never cease to impress, amaze, and inspire me. I can only pray and hope that my writing will someday be as good as yours. :o)

Ok fine no hitman.. Doesn\'t mean I am not arming myself among all the other readers with pitchforks and sticks on fire.. We are coming to get you if you don\'t at least give her another story for her to be happy again..

this chapter was the best. i cried all through it and still crying. can\'t wait tell the next chapter. u are a really great writer. keep up the great writing.

Is she stupid or what!!!! Read the damn letter idiot joanne!!! >o< she made me sooo angry!!!!!!!!
Great chapter, quick but great ^^
I\'m sure the letter says, please joanne wait for me when i\'ll be better i\'ll come back (i so love fluff ^o^)

Keep it like that, you\'re the best ever!!!!

YES ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!! WHOOT!!! Im sooooo sad right now... my heart feels really clenched up and Im crying soo much!!!... I still cant believe Eve is... d-d-d-d... d-ead!!!!!!... WAAAAAHHHH!!!!! I was like... *mouth open dramatically and shocked* And now, Mark is left out in the dust with no one to care for!!!... So now is it gonna be like after a few years, Joanne and Jake meet up again!!!??? But poor little heart felt Joanne captivates the heart of Mark. Right!? RIGHT!!!??? Oh I hope so!!!... And I could practically imagine Jake two years from now!!! *droool!!!* and Joannes gonna be like... O_O THAT\'S JAKE!!!??? What a hottie!!! bwahahhahaha!!!!! But Marks gonna be really hott too!!!!!!!... *sigh* WHY ME!!!??? Now I cant choose between the boys... *lol* Anyways, good job on this chapter!!! I\'ll be waiting on the edge of my seat for another update really soon, I hope!!!!!

Gosh, that was a great chapter, so incredibly sad. I dunno about anyone else, but I loved the part where you had her put the letter with the picture and she said she wasn\'t ready to let go yet. That really tugged at my heart. If it would\'ve been me, I wouldv\'e torn it open but I totally understand why she did it especially in her state of mind. I just couldn\'t believe Jake subconsciously pushed her away like that though. Even though he said that it was because she reminded him of Eve, I couldn\'t help but that feel he somewhat blamed her too. You never mentioned it but that\'s just what I got.
Thanks for posting. BTW... was that the last chapter? I hope not.

Ahh, no kudos for once;) Thats ok.

Another great chapter from a great writer. You really know how to pack that emotion in there, and even though we dont want to read about all that drama, its force fed to us and we like it. A lot... even if some of us do cry ;(. Keep writing!

Wow. I had a feeling someone was going to die, so I was surprised at how shocked I was. I am so impressed with the immensity of your writing abilities. I think you\'re particularly good at writing the more angst-filled chapters and I\'ve got to say, my heart was literally breaking. This is such a fantastic story, because it\'s unlike your other ones. It\'s more poignant and moving and I\'m loving every moment of it. Just take your time with this story as I kinda get the feeling it\'s been a difficult journey for you, although saying that, you\'ve come out with fantastic work despite this :)

That was incredibly sad even though I was expecting it. I\'m dying to know what happened and what happens next.