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for Why Bother?

by Tirch

person Lustful x Magic
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOO! Oh my gosh it can\'t end. haha I really love this story and like, always cry when you write those sad parts. If I was Jo, i\'d be the same. I\'d be too scared to see him for the pain is still there, but then it would be so hard to not see him
person iotc247
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a hard chapter to read.. Very emotional.. I guess it means alot coming from a guy? Anyways I demand a happy ending (get back together) or you continue joannes story to find someone else.. I just demand it... But if anyone else dies I will have this nuke here delivered to you nicely..
person rosie
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...i keep checking to see if you posted the last story yet..... :(
person psycosnake
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I said it was quick because i read it fast? lol
THIS chapter was like: OMFGWHIT but why ohhh why is joanne sooooooo stupid over this!!! i don\'t know, i would love someone like she loves jake i would take any opportunity given to me to see him!!! what is this \'I want to go over this story so i wonder if i have to see him\'.....maaannnnnnn he loves her she loves him WTF is wrong in her tiny little head!!!!
Otherwise great chapter i thought i would cry but i control myself (yay for selfcontrol lol)
I don\'t want this story to end ;_; it is the best i read (your other story too)

>o<
person rosie
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHH!!! she will see him!!!!!!
person Sphynx
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You came very close to making me cry this chapter. As a person who has lost her best friend (my father to a car accident), I know allllll to well how Joanne feels. And it\'s not a pretty thing. Wonderful chapter :D Trust me, if you can make me cry. . it\'s a good sign ^^
person matrixchild
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say this has been one of the most enjoyable stories i have ever read. The emotion, the characters, everything is so real. I felt like i was a person within the story watching it all take place. I can not express the magnatitude in which this story struck me. I love the way everything happened. It was funny, it was frusturating and it was incredibly sad. Thank you for writing this. It is an amazing peace of work and i look forward to reading the last chapter.
MC
person Katy The Bean
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, this story is great, it took me quiet along time 2 read but it was worth it, Eve dying nearly made me cry, I hope u UpDaTe quick, this is a brilliant story, you\'re a talented writer :-).
person Sphynx
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww T____T That was so sweet, yet sad at the same time. The whole letter thing is similar to what will happen in my own story. I\'m telling you this now so you don\'t think I\'m copying off you later on. ^_^ It\'s different though, and for a totally different situation. You\'ll understand.

I can\'t wait for the next chapter of this story. You\'ve really gotten me hooked and I\'m dying to know if they end up together or not :D I\'ll be looking forward to it :D
person rosie
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh..please...please...puhlease- get them back together--- after all this pain they need to find happiness....PLEASE!!!