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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best stories I\'ve ever read. I wish it ended with them married and kids but I\'m not gonna push my luck, that did just fine. I\'m gonna go out on a limb and conclude that they\'re gonna grow old together since they\'ve overcome most of the obstacles that kept them apart. Namely the father.
You\'re such a great writer and I hope you\'ll grace us with more of your talent. I\'ll be keeping an eye out!
You\'re such a great writer and I hope you\'ll grace us with more of your talent. I\'ll be keeping an eye out!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the last chapter was a very good ending to a really great story. can\'t wait to read upcoming stories from you. keep up the great writing. you are really good.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Finally, finally, FINALLY, a happy ending! :D I\'m SO happy for Jo and Jake. I know it isn\'t going to be smooth sailing, but they\'re both people who deserve a shot at happiness, and I\'m glad things turned out the way they did. I really love the way you write, and I\'ve been following all your stories since you started writing them. :D Keep up the great work!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a phenomenal story. Mean there is not words to describe what this story is. It was the influential. This story is a masterpiece. Jo had faced so much. She had struggles and obstacles that she had overcame, but what is her decision about Jake. They have been through so much…I really think that their destined to be together their soul mates. Update soon. E-mail me when you do. Thanks
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! Definately cant wait to see what you decide to let come of the meeting between the two.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s hope for them both. Hopefully time has helped to heal Jake\'s wounds and let him get his act together. Happy ending pls?
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look, I\'ve spent the last two chapters in tears...and I\'m not really one to cry easily. And every time I do, it\'s always your fault ^_~ I\'m glad this isn\'t the last chapter, because if it had been, I would have just died. Yes, closure, please!
Although, I must say, that this last chapter did leave me with a kind of content, melancholy feeling. It was nice to see that Joanne moved on (kind of) and that she got back into gear, started her life again, made new friends. I love how you tied your first chapter in with this last one -it was a nice refresher on how the whole thing grabbed my attention in the first place. Good technique ^_^ I really am glad that you stuck this one out. It\'s very different than your others and, I think, probably one of your best pieces. You have a lot of very light moments in this, but, as a whole, this is much darker than your other stories and I think that\'s what makes it one of my favorites. I\'m glad to see that you kept this air of dreadful expectancy throughout and didn\'t fall into the pit that so many writers do of wanting to create a kind of \'happily ever after\' ending. Of course, this isn\'t the end, and I REALLY do hope they live happily ever after ^_^ But, I\'m not expecting you to make it all butterflies and rainbows -at least, I hope you don\'t. It would really take something from the story as a whole if you did. I\'m sure everyone out there just wants Joanne and Jake to just magically fall in love and for everything to be normal again. But, I mean, reality check? How many times in life does that actually happen? THAT is what I love about your stories. They could be insight into anyone\'s life, could be a story about people we really know -and how many people do we know have had story book endings? And, just from the way you write, I feel like I really DO know these people.
Ugh, I\'ve rambled. I\'ll hush now and let you get back to doing what you do so well -keeping me completely hooked on every word. The last two chapters were great -which didn\'t really surprise me ^_^ Keep it up! I look forward to the resolution of this story -just don\'t make me cry anymore, okay? ^_^
Although, I must say, that this last chapter did leave me with a kind of content, melancholy feeling. It was nice to see that Joanne moved on (kind of) and that she got back into gear, started her life again, made new friends. I love how you tied your first chapter in with this last one -it was a nice refresher on how the whole thing grabbed my attention in the first place. Good technique ^_^ I really am glad that you stuck this one out. It\'s very different than your others and, I think, probably one of your best pieces. You have a lot of very light moments in this, but, as a whole, this is much darker than your other stories and I think that\'s what makes it one of my favorites. I\'m glad to see that you kept this air of dreadful expectancy throughout and didn\'t fall into the pit that so many writers do of wanting to create a kind of \'happily ever after\' ending. Of course, this isn\'t the end, and I REALLY do hope they live happily ever after ^_^ But, I\'m not expecting you to make it all butterflies and rainbows -at least, I hope you don\'t. It would really take something from the story as a whole if you did. I\'m sure everyone out there just wants Joanne and Jake to just magically fall in love and for everything to be normal again. But, I mean, reality check? How many times in life does that actually happen? THAT is what I love about your stories. They could be insight into anyone\'s life, could be a story about people we really know -and how many people do we know have had story book endings? And, just from the way you write, I feel like I really DO know these people.
Ugh, I\'ve rambled. I\'ll hush now and let you get back to doing what you do so well -keeping me completely hooked on every word. The last two chapters were great -which didn\'t really surprise me ^_^ Keep it up! I look forward to the resolution of this story -just don\'t make me cry anymore, okay? ^_^
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapters 19-20, poor everybody especially Jake. He was so protective of Eve and now to feel he is responsible for her death even though it was an accident. Moms are the best. Oh my gosh, the letter he wrote to Joanne was amazing. What he said to her was so poignant. If we all could have a Jake in our lives. I can’t believe it’s almost over. Thank goodness you’re going to add another chapter and you gave me hope for Joanne and Jake. Thanks for updating:)
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great, u have 2 post the last chap ASAP please.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... You\'re totally welcome, chica. You so deserve it! This story has come so far, and you\'ve done such an amazing job. The letter was... so bittersweet. Poor Jake. He\'s gone through so much shit, he needs a little bit of happiness to even the score. I hope Jo and Jake can work through their differences and find a way to be together. But hey, I trust you. Write away, oh talented one. :o)