rate_review Reviews

well you may be a little iffy about it but i really like it. I mean really like it, it has more depth than flame and leah and its just better to read in general (not that flame and leah is bad to read) Please please continue! you\'re doing so well!

Okay, I just got done reading the last installment of Starting Over and I\'ll say, you\'re writing style is certainly very mature. The beginning of this - I\'ll admit - made me think twice, but I stuck with it and it -does- get better as it goes on. You\'ve worked your own style into this much more and improved the quality significantly overall.The beginning seemed forced and some parts look like you\'ve just crammed them in there for the hell of it, but overall, I think I\'ll enjoy this as well - maybe not as much as Starting Over, but certainly a large amount of enjoyment will be had. =P

Don\'t give up on this story, \'cause it has great potential and I know you have the power to bring it out, so good luck and I\'ll be back again when you post the next chapter (which hopefully won\'t be too long, ay?)

-Micah.

I really love your stories. They have a moral lesson and yet are steamy. You have a good instinct with your writing, and I especially love this story. You are creating great characters and I hope you follow through with it. I really can\'t stand when people don\'t finish their stories. People enjoy them and yours are no exception.

Micah - THANK YOU! God, I felt so uncomfortable with the first few chapters - as they did feel forced. But chapter four felt way more like me, and I\'m hoping to continue on this vein. Please, keep giving me CRITICISM as well as praise. Unlike some authors on this site (who, out of courtesy, I will refrain from naming) I WANT to hear constructive criticism. It\'s the only way in which I will learn to write better. And all your input helps me so much. So please, keep it up! And thanks again!

your best...i LOVE LOVE LOVE it....oh please update sooooooon!!!!
-G

What? IFFY? No no no no!
Moie likey! Good good good good!
Besides, I\'d be awfully upset if you stopped now. (I wanna know what happens...)

oh my gah! i\'ve missed this! i\'m really happy you\'ve decided to put this back up! i love it! i love it!