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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing this story I love it so far....and it killed me when you stopped it. You have talent and know how to write a good story, so please write more!!!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww
please update soon
the update elf is hungry
*smiles*
please update soon
the update elf is hungry
*smiles*
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am truly wowed by the complexity of the characters in this story. This is not just smut like most of the stuff that is floating around nowadays is, but rather, an adventure with two people that are dealing with their own problems. The characters are beleivable (and some resemble myself closely), and for once I actually care about what is going on in the story. Keep up the good work, and please, UPDATE!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stop being iffy...it\'s really good
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why should you be iff? it\'s great!!! i like it the best of all your stories so far...and the others are pretty damn good too...please keep writing!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can see why some of your readers asked for you to repost this story. I actually like this story from just reading the first four chapters. The drama unfolds pretty quickly but I don’t mind it at all. Wow, I am actually excited to see what happens next. With this story I hope you go further into the future of these characters. Thanks for updating so often .
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its great! i luv it! the characters! everything! joanne and jake?! my type of story =D please please continue.. i\'d hate it if u didn\'t, thanks a bunch! =)
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this story...I think it\'s purdy awesome right now, but I\'m super curious as to what happened to Eve and Jake...Why aren\'t they still in the picture? Well, I hope you keep writing this story!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Criticism? I don\'t see anything to criticize about. This is definitely one of the best fics here. You\'ve done well with it. Just a question though, will there be anymore F/F later in the fic?
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad to see that you\'ve given this story another try. I think, so far, it\'s good. You have added an element that could be explosive as far as drama goes. Not only is the father abusive, but he\'s an alcoholic. The fact that you have eluded to something happening to Eve and Jake already in the first chapter, makes me want to see what happens. You\'re building this up well and I\'m hanging on every word! Please don\'t stop now!