rate_review Reviews

I have been reading many of your stories for a while... and I have been captivated by every one I read. I really liked this one. I absoltely HATE stories where a very important main character dies, but you pulled it off very well. I am definitely not complaining. I think that you ended this story the way it should be ended. It gives the readers hope and I believe that you make your characters very real. Even though Jake and Joanne are not real, I hope that in their world, they work out. You are a great author and I hope to be able to read more of your wonderful stories in every single free minute of my time.

Again, great job!
Rosemary

I just have to say that you are an amazing writer! I laughed when the characters laughed, was sad when they were sad, was angry when they were angry and cried when they cried. It was a story that you could just loose yourself in. It gives me hope. I\'d just like to thank you for writing it, as I said it was an amazing story to read.

This was the most beautiful story i have read. It gave me hope and made me cry. You are a marvelous writer. I love this story. It made my day by reading it.

I just finish reading your fic and I can\'t stop smiling... This is really wonderfull!
I loved the couple... and the development of Joanne was great...
I saw that you have others stories, so I guess I\'ll have plenty to read! ;)
Congratulations for your hard work!
(I won\'t mind at all if you decide to write a sequel...)
Kisses!

Reviewing chapter 21, the last and final chapter to a great story. I love the characters in this story. This story was a roller coaster of emotions. You are truly brilliant in conveying feelings and emotions into words. I am so happy to see Jake and Joanne happy they deserve to be. You’re right I don’t know if they will really end up together forever but at least they are willing to give it another chance. First love is awesome whether you end up with that person or not but finding true love is a blessing. I’m so sappy sometimes, yuck. I hope one day your work will get publish because I know it will be worth every penny. I can’t thank you enough for finishing this story and for creating such great characters readers could empathize with:)

Hi there, I saw this story was completed so I gave it a try. And you know what, I was completely hooked from the first chapter.

It was very well written, few times you left us confused as to where the story goes (and that\'s a good point, nothing\'s worst that seeing right through the author\'s intention), you also stay tru to your characters.

I loved it. You did a very good job.

Tirch..... Mate!!! I have to admit this story IS your best story to date..... absolutely brilliant...... this story had just the right amount of darkness as well as a well rounded and happy ending...... have to admit that you are one of the best writers I\'ve ever come across ....

Cheers

Crea

That was really reallly great, I loved it..................
:-)

Great closing chapter! I like the way it was left open, because I dont think i would have wanted it any other way. Keep up the great writing on other stories now, cant wait to read more of them!

great ending, very good story, well done tirch :D