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for Why Bother?

by Tirch

person cass
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Intersting I like it alot. Please continue.
person ava
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story! I\'m loving where this is going, and I\'m happy that you have updated.
person Josette
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t stop writing this story. It is so good. I feel so bad for Jake and Eve. I enjoy reading your stories. Please continue.
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dont stop...this is really great
person Sphynx
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wonderful story so far. Jake is an amazing character, and ever so paitent with Jo. . . which always comes in handy when you\'re nervous about the \'final step\'. *laughs* I loved Jo\'s mother spazzing about her daughter having sex. . I can totally see my mom doing that as well. Keep up the good work!
person papermiracle
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE LOVE LOVE it. It\'s so sad. A little mushy, but i really want to see what happens and if Joanne can get over it. Oh please don\'t let it be too sad :-( Please keep writing and updating...
person Ny
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitely don\'t think it\'s crap. I think it\'s going in the right direction, and I hope you continue with it.
person Kirsche
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahh!
Poor Jake! *tear*
This is really good. Bother, please bother. If you stop writing I\'ll be very distraught. I\'m already hanging on the other two you\'re working on right now and it\'ll drive me insane if you stop this one, (or the others...*hint hint*)
Keep up the awesome work,
Kirsche
person bree
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty pretty please keep going on this story... i like it! im starting to fall for jake too :)
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good so far