rate_review Reviews

Awsome story. Very well written. You paint very vivid characters. Almost too sad and scary, I\'ll have to remember not too read the next chapters so late at night.

Okay, so I really, really, really think that you should continue to work on this. Don\'t get me wrong, I think that your other stories are fabulous, but I think that this one has so much potential too! It\'s eating me up to find out what happened to cause Johanne to lose Jake and Eve! I mean, you hint at Jake having just as much of a bad temper as his father in the last chapter...so, what happens? Does Jake kill his dad, and Eve helps, and now they\'re in jail? Do they both get killed by their dad in a car wreck because he\'s drunk? You see the craziness that is running around in my head?! No pressure, but you HAVE to finish this! ^_^

OOooo. . Dark side of Jake coming out in this chapter. Sorta scary. . makes you wonder sometimes, neh? Good chapter!

ohhh, i think i know exactly where you\'re going with this! that\'s a great idea. you are AWESOME! keep goin

I\'m dying to know what happens--because clearly at the start (end) they aren\'t together...
so keep writing please!!

All of you stories are great, don\'t stop writing any of them, I especially enjoy this one Jake his a great guy

Please don’t doubt this story it is really good. Okay I will admit that I do get a little emotional when I read this story and readers like myself think it is totally worth it for you to continue this amazing and heart wrenching story. I hope that helped:). I feel so bad for Jake and I have a feeling this story might end tragically. You have no idea how I want to know what will or has happened to the characters since Joanne has started college. Thank you for updating it:)

Lovely story. Keep it up! =)

I love it, i wasn\'t really expecting anything but u\'ve got me hooked!! This is a truely GREAT story, but i\'m a little scared of what will happen to Eve and Jake... please support the happy endings!!!

Oh please please please continue!
It\'s a wonderful story! And the romance is to die for!
It\'s such lovely writing!
Please keep writing..
it\'s too good of a story to end now!
-Zarah<3