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Ahh... exactly where I wanted to see the next chapter of that story go. I definately would not have been happy if Joanne had acted as if everything were normal. A minor freak out was definately called for, and you delivered! Good job! As always, keep it up;)

mmmmmmmm....a breath of fresh air! just so perfect! i think i love you...

I really like this story. Please continue. It seems as if Eve and Jake have some serious issues to deal with.

The only thing I think this story feels is too... I dont know... The last chapter seemed a lot more forced than the others. Keep up the good work though!

Good chapter in showing how Eve and Jake’s parents abuse is affecting them psychologically. Someone needs to put their father in jail and their mother also for neglecting them and for letting the father abuse them. The story is fine the way it is. Actually when I first read this story I thought it would be darker than this. Thanks for updating and asking for our opinions.

This story is sooooo good so far!!!

When\'s the next chapter??

What i\'m really puzzled by is that in your first chapter you said that Eve was dead, and the fact that Joanne had been DATING, which makes me think something terrible happens to them both!!

I really love this story so far!! Please continue!!

Well I certainly still like this story, but I have a little bit of criticism for once. In both of your stories that I have read (the other being the one with the girl and the rock star... sorry im not good with names), your female characters seem to lose their naivete a little too quickly. You do a great job of keeping them uptight and nervous through the first part, but then they just seem to lose all of that. Not that that is always a bad thing, I just think a little more attention to that aspect of their lives should have gotten a little more attention.

There are hints of the Reynold siblings having more secrets in chapter 7 and 8 but personally I have no idea what direction this story is going. I like to guess/speculate, but I also don’t wanna know if I’m right. Actually being wrong makes it more interesting to read. By the way both chapters are good but I think the most revealing thing you’ve told us is in chapter one (not sure) where you mention Joanne seeking therapy and that she can’t bring back Eve or something. Even putting that in consideration I have no idea. Thanks for updating and keep us guessing.

so real...so intense....s0oo0o0o0 great!!!

I Love this story! Can\'t wait for more, you\'re a great writer!