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Great addition.... hope this isnt the end!

ok now i\'m really angry!
I read your story straight and what do i see! They broke up...;man you have to arrange this in something better coz i swear i will hate you for the rest of my life (lmaooo)
No seriously, i absolutly love your story, it\'s really well written, good plot, love the caracter and Joanne/Jake are sooo totally cuuuteeeeeeeee!!!
Why did you make them break up???? It\'s soo awfull!! And please oh please don\'t tell me he will die or something i\'ll cry for the rest of my life (maybe not all my life but at least one day of it) See i\'m already crying while i type this msg! ;____; poor Joanne
hmmm just wondering how someone can always be THIS happy (speaking of Eve) heck, i know someone can be happy 5 days out of 7 but ALL days it\'s impossible...
And the Jake/Eve parents story.....why this idiot mother won\'t do anything >o< that piss me off! Please kill this drunken father! i\'d like to see him in an awfull long and torturous death *grin devily*
Otherwise you\'re for now my favorite writter!! and i\'m waiting impatiently for the next chapie to be online!!! *run and hide in a rats-hole*

psyco!

YAY!!!! ^_^ I\'m so happy you updated this story...even if it did end on a \'dark note.\' But the angst is okay because you are so good at it...it keeps me hooked! I\'m glad you have finally found your direction for this story, and I look forward to your next chapter!

i love this story because it\'s so original...i\'m so glad that you got over the writer\'s block and i cannot wait for the next chapter

this is amazing, bloody brilliant. i am really happy that you updated as well.
now, on another subject, did you know that they are coming out with a movie that could almost be based on your story like a dream come true? it had ashley simpson in it. just thought that you would like to know
yours truly,
cope

TRY?!?!?! Ok ok I know two stories ok but please don\'t leave it like you did last time.. Good story finally fills in the beginning.. What was funny is that for some reason at first the browser was showing the first chapter for chapter 11 and I was like wtf did you copy the chapter for.. Refreshed and it was another good chapter. Hope you keep it up.. Good luck with this and Original Sin (I hope she gets with eddie!!)

Hey!

Just a quick note to let you kow I hope you\'re still posting this story as I\'m so very intrigued to find out what happens!

Hope you continue the story soon! great job with the writing.

I ike this a lot. please, PLEASE continue

Chapter 10 is good because you convey Joanne’s fears and Jake’s intensity/anger well. It’s just what the chapter needed. In this chapter you put the name Marcus instead of Mark in this sentence “searching her face, Marcus shook his head…” Thanks for updating