rate_review Reviews

Very nice story you have here, though I\'m scared about what\'s going to happen to Jake and Eve. With that in mind, you\'ll have me checking every day to see if you\'ve updated. Awesome job!

YAYYYY you absolutly made my day worth it!!!!
two chapters *___* i\'m so happy and they did get back together *purrrrr* love on you love on you!!! I thought i\'d cry when i read that part!!

I\'m still wondering what will happen in the end *groan* (it\'s killing me not to know!!)
Just hoping it will be a long long long story

psyco

ps: your other story are great!! even though i only read like a dream come true and flame and leah! I sooooo love your writing!!!!!!!!!!!

oh ok...
well good chapter!
poor joanne, i really hope jake and she will get back together ;__;

for now i have nuthing to say (my review is sooooo interesting lmaooo)
maybe one thing?
next chapie next chapie!!!??

psyco

OMG i can\'t waitttttt. Nice chappie. I\'m glad they got together...but why\'s college Jo so sad then? well, i suppose it\'ll be anwered in the next few chapters so please update soooooon :-D [jo and jake getting back together has put me in such a good mood!]
love always,
G

Great addition- plz continue!

I\'m so glad you decided to start this story up again. I love the drama and angst in this and it really pulled on my heart strings - something that rarely happens to me when I\'m reading stories.

I\'m sooo glad you ended this chapter on a lighter note, because I wasn\'t sure I could have dealt with another sad ending after that completely depressing chapter.

It was great though! ^_^ I mean, not great that it was sad, just incredibly well written...you have this amazing talent at making me feel like my own heart is breaking along with your character\'s. I hope them being apart doesn\'t last too long. I\'m still very curious to see where this is going.

Also, I just wanted to say that you are really very good at switching viewpoints throughout your chapters. I\'ve read some stories where people do that, and it just becomes confusing or irritating. In your stories, though, it just seems so natural that, most of the time, I don\'t even notice it. It\'s nice being able to see the thoughts, feelings, and observations of all the characters without feeling like you\'re being jerked from one to the other.

Good, good, good! And, of course, I can\'t wait for the next!

oh that was such a nice chappie! I just can\'t wait till we get back to the present Joanna at college. I hope good things happen. As always, excellent work dearie :-)
-G

Still a great story. I think it has the potential to be your best, but you have a good way to go to get there. Keep up the good work!

Ahhh a well written chapter with a much needed change of speed. Keep it up.