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OMG NO!!! JUST WHEN I THOUGHT THINGS WERE GOING STEADY... DUN DUN DUN!!!!! ANOTHER EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!! HAHAHA... NOOOO!!!!!!!!! POOR JAKE AND POOR EVE... HAHAHAHA!!! IF I WAS A CHARACTER IN THIS FANFIC, THEN ID KILL THEIR DAD!!! MUWAHAHHHAAAA... BUT SERIOUSLY, I WISH SOMEONE COULD FIND OUT!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON BECAUSE ILL CONSTANTLY CHECK IN FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! BUT PLEASE UPDATE ORIGINAL SIN FIRST!!!!! ^-^

Ah angst! You do it so well, don\'t ever think that you don\'t! I sit here and just cry and cry and my roommate gives me funny looks every time I sniffle. It\'s great!

Wonderful chapter! (you can tell I really liked it -look at all the exclamation points I used ^_^) This story is such a good, tragic love story. Glad to see an update, and I look forward to the next.

We want Original Sin! :D

Yipee!! Finally that stupid ass of a father is going to jail.. I hope you have it where he is sentenced to go to a rehab clinic and jail time for a while... Maybe mark and joanne will never get back together with their loved ones and the story will have it where they move on and in some reunion meet again...

I am a sucker for happy endoings sp please come around to the conversation in the beggining and put Jo and Jake back together...ppplllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaassssseeee!

Hi New Reader...
I\'m offically the fourth wheel in Jake and Joanne\'s relationship (after Eve). Only in a fic can you find a guy as dreamy and addictive as Jake. Joanne\'s cool but it\'s all about Jake to me. lolz..
I was initially confused in the first chapter when you had mentioned Eve, but caught on soon after. After reading what you had so far, I re-read the first chapter and it made my heart dropped. What happened to Eve?? I\'m assuming she met a terrible fate... through her father maybe?! And what happened to Jake for them not to be together???? There\'s no clues!! I\'m dying to find out what happened between them! Thanks for posting. Please post again soon.

Another good chapter, love the ending to it.

I almost missed this...you updated too fast *GASPS* Oh my god, did I really just say that?! I\'m just kidding! Update fast! ^_^

Hurray! They got back together! I have a feeling I will need all the warm-fuzzy feeling I can get...considering that I\'m so afraid that this story isn\'t going to have a happy ending...oh, I hope it does. Also, GREAT job at the dialogue between the girls in the bathroom. I really think it was pretty close to high-school these days. I don\'t remember it being that way...girls are so VICIOUS now.

Update soon! Totally love this story!

Reviewing chapters 11, 12 and 13. Thank you for continuing this story. I knew when you where ready to continue this story you will. Wow, these three chapters have been a roller coaster of feelings but the good thing is Jake and Joanne are back together again. I like them together but I am with Joanne on how violent Jake can be sometimes. One thing I have to say is that thank goodness I’m not in high school anymore. Girls are so caddy. I’m glad Eve has worked out her feelings with Mark. I like Eve for what she said to Jake in chapter 13. Good come back with these three chapters. This story is dark but there is something about these characters that I can\'t dislike. I wonder what will happen when Jake goes to college and Joanne is still in high school. Good job and thanks for updating.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! i\'m trying to figure out why Jo is so sad at the beginning but the only thing i can think of it there is a terrorible tragedy.... i hope that isnt true lol but yea i love this story!!!!!! keep up the great work....