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ok i can get with that and I know it is a great thing to have friends. But i am confused again now I just got to keep reading because your have three chapters left and Eve and Jo are almost friends and jake is back. So why did Joanne obsess about Eve the whole senior year. She is still alive so far. i just got to keep reading. Update when ever but dont make it a year lol

Foamyfan might be able to explain it to you in regards to her first story you know where Cole dies.. 1 person dead is enough..

Reviewing chapter 16-17, I’ve really enjoyed reading these two chapters. The chapters made me feel sadness to bittersweet to happiness. I’m glad Jake, Joanne and Eve are starting over and renewing their friendship. I hope they do the same with Mark. I’m worried something bad is going to happen because Jake said his dad is getting out of jail. In the first chapter Joanne mentioned that she is seeing a therapist so that definitely means something major happened. Thanks for updating.

Yay for Happy Jake! Have I mentioned that I just love Happy Jake? Yay! So yeah, ominous music? I\'m thinking it has something to do with daddy dearest coming home Monday? Oh boy. That\'s probably not going to be pretty. I\'m also thinking that daddy dearest\'s return to the picture has something to do with the reason Eve is thought about in the first chapter and the reason Jo doesn\'t want to date. And, since there\'s only three chapters left, I\'m thinking I should shut up and just be patient and wait for my answers. Unfortunately, I\'m not so good at that. I love this. I\'m nuerotically obsessed with it. Seriously. Oh, and the chapter a day updates? If I knew you, I\'d kiss you. Too great. You\'ve made my week! Now, if this whole hurricane Rita thing would just... blow over and not kill me... yeah... what are my chances of the fic getting finished before say... Saturday? Cause if not I\'ve talked to Foamyfan and she\'s promised to read it to me via a Ouija board. I\'m thinking that may be most difficult....

ominous...so i\'m predicting that either jake or jo will die, something will happen with jake\'s dad, or he slept with one of his dates post-Jo in an effort to get over her and accidentally got her pregnant, thus ruining his relationship with jo forever. i was hoping for a happy three chapters...=/ by the way, i really hope jake didn\'t sleep with anyone after jo...that would just totally kill everything.

Yeah, so I just about cried my eyes out. =)

Okay.. I\'ll just say this straight, I nearly started cryign whilst reading this. So that gives some kind of view of this story being quite good. And yes I\'m impatiently waiting for the next part!

Well good chapter crappy outcome. Explains the first chapter at least. If anyone dies plan your funeral though. And if she doesn\'t fall in love again or something by the end of this I demand a sequel..

this is going to sound weird but after reading that I really want no i mean need joanne and mark together. I say forget eve and jake. I dont know why they dont go and thank joanne for saving their messed up lives. Anyway great writing and a great greatttttttttttttt chapter. Update soon. I\'m loving it and I am really loving you (not like that lol)

Ok, ya know what, at first I felt bad for Jake and Eve, and now I\'m just pissed at them. I can\'t believe how stubborn they\'re being!!! They both obviously want to get back together with their significant others, yet they refuse to do so, because... Hell, I don\'t even know!!! lol AUGH. Anyway, that was a very bittersweet chapter. Somehow I doubt that things are going to end too happily for Jake and Eve. I wonder what you have in store for them... As for e-mailing you, I might just have to do that! I know you\'re very busy, but have you been reading my new story? If so, what do you think? No pressure. I\'m just curious. :o) Thanks bunches, and I hope you\'re doing well!