rate_review Reviews

hotness.. you know, everytime i see you guys now, i\'m going to be picturing this in my head, hehe

Well, I officially feel dirty. Peeping Tom/Voyeur dirty. Putting that aside, the story was nicely done. Made me want to hide my face, but still a nice bit of lemon! My only suggestion is that I think there should have been a more detailed description of (y\'all?) the characters. That and I was confused about the sleeping arrangement. If this is a \"confession/first time,\" why is the bedroom shared? It sounded like there was only one bed in the room, so that threw me a bit. If you post another story, more anti-lemon details please.

(Most of the readers on here would probably like the lemon bit to be more detailed too, but it was fine IMO.)

V, Queen of the long sentences

I swear, I just stumbled onto your lj the other day.....and now i find this? I feel like a stalker now....