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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Yes, I agree a sequel would be good (ok so you haven\'t gotten many actual reviews, but you do have nearly 500 hits!). My only problem with the story was their consumating the relationship so soon after Travis is practically beaten to death. All I could think was Ow ow ow!! As severe as you made his injuries sound, it just hurt me to imagine having sex in that condition. Yeah, sex is a pretty good anesthetic but still. :) And I think if I were Zach I\'d be too worried about Travis to do it just then. Other than that though, the story was nicely paced and well written.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! your lemon, while \"vague\" was pretty hot i reckon and your characters are well constructed, all in all a rather good job if i dont say so myself lol.