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for No Way Out

by pyremoon99

person Jessica
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, I like it alot! So excited to see how it turns out....Only bit of constructive critisim the chapters are kinda short...but I still love it :)
person Arainaina
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting please update again soon
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. this story is really good. I really hope jessi is ok. I hope that you can make it so that jessi and joe get to be together. thanks.
person Fran
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap.... i love this... and i must have more... this is an amazing story!!!!!!!!
person Arainaina
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting poor jessi I hope everything turns out ok for her in the end anyway please update again soon
person Alex
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! I love your story soooooo much. It\'s really sad and moving and you\'re an awesome writer. I almost cried during these last few chapers!
person mellyissa
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really excellent story, I cant wait for the next chapter
Good Job!
person CD
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm...i think chap 7 is a repeat of chap 6 ... just to let you know
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks i hadn\'t realized but hey since thats done new chapter coming tomorrow cuz im off yay thanks to everyone who has been reviewing i love this story and im glad others do too
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT\'S WONDERFUL!! KEEP GOING!! I CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! WILL SHE COME OUT OF HER COMMA SOON?! UP DATE SOON PLEASE. (SORRY I\'M NOT VERY GOOD AT REVIEWING!)