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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At first I was indifferent to the story but now I like it. The first four chapters I could not relate to Catherine or her actions but now I feel sorry for her. Catherine has been through so much and these guys should give her space. It is a good thing she talked to Marcus again because now she has some closure. For some reason I do not like James even from the beginning of the story. I like Batey but still he needs to not rush things. I’m a hopeless romantic but I would not mind if Catherine in the end did not chose anyone. I’m trying to give you a long review because I have not been reviewing for the last 8 chapters, sorry. Keep up the good work. Thanks.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo! i love batey. i think she needs to be with him! love it all! update soon!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, as per usual!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter. The meeting with Marcus was so good.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Drama unfolds! I want her and Batley gets together, but I dout that you will tell us!
Update Soon
Liz
Update Soon
Liz
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I seriously adore this story. I don\'t even have any suggestions. Just keep doing what you\'re doing. Please.
Thanks :)
Thanks :)
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing to say the least. Normally i would never review when an author practically begs for it but i\'m making an exception this one time. i think, in my humble opinion, that you really have a way with words and it would be a shame for you to stop writing. your last story Flame and Leah was amazing as well. your characters seem incredibly real and the reader is able to identify with them.
keep up the great wrok.
Katherine Elizabeth
keep up the great wrok.
Katherine Elizabeth
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I\'ve been following this story with great interest, but only today I actually had the time to review. I really like this story, the plot seems very well thought out and even though there are lots of lemons they actually fit in with the plot and make it work extremely well. I find all the characters very well planned, they all seem realistic and believable. The dark undertones of your story are also remarkable; really makes me stay interested and look forward to updates. All in all, good job girl ^.^!
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I\'ve been following this story with great interest, but only today I actually had the time to review. I really like this story, the plot seems very well thought out and even though there are lots of lemons they actually fit in with the plot and make it work extremely well. I find all the characters very well planned, they all seem realistic and believable. The dark undertones of your story are also remarkable; really makes me stay interested and look forward to updates. All in all, good job girl ^.^!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please dont stop writting this story.... its really very good. i cant wait to read the next chapter, im very intrigued to find out what happens next. - bree :)
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no ....it\'s worth your time ! i think it\'s wonderful and realistic