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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...does that mean it\'s over?
(please, not over yet! nooo...)
(please, not over yet! nooo...)
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. That sure wasn\'t the welcoming Ben was expecting, but maybe it will help him to keep his mind off his father.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. PLease more. It makes me all misty eyed
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, i love this story! so sweet!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoo hooo! about time! that was a very good first time! how about some on the wall action?
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story. I loved the other one and have been wanting to wait untill you have posted few chapters before beginning reading this one. Let\'s say i\'m not disapointed. You managed to keep your reader in the dark concerning a possible future with Batey, just as your main character was. She was torn between few guys and so were we. I know I couldn\'t have say which one I wanted to see with Catherine until the last 2 chapters.
I\'m really impatient to read more about the story. Keep the good job coming
I\'m really impatient to read more about the story. Keep the good job coming
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 is very sentimental and it was very touching for me especially when Batey had that conversation with his mother. Did you know that your use of words in this chapter has invoked so many emotions in me from the beginning to the ending. Your description of the kissing between Batey and Catherine was…wow. Another good chapter and thanks for updating.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! not superficial romance, with a great plot that has kept me hooked...I love your writing too. Keep up the good work and I can\'t wait to read more of your stuff.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you do personalities really well. It\'s as if I\'ve met each character in real life.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story i\'ve ever read...it\'s very....NON PREDICTABLE! i really love it