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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!!!! what happens next. ayeeeeeeee i cannot WAIT for the next chapter. drama drama drama...
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m starting to dread the moment when Ben will discover his brother lied to him. But he should know his brother right? Mr I-want-to-make-everyone-happy Andy. Besides now that Batey told him about this other woman, will he be able to put 2 and 2 together?
Like someone said earlier, your characters stay true to theirself. From the beginning we knew that Batey was a peace maker, and we can see that lying to his brother is really bothering him
Like someone said earlier, your characters stay true to theirself. From the beginning we knew that Batey was a peace maker, and we can see that lying to his brother is really bothering him
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
There was more, is more, will be more!
Happy happy happy!
( Hey, nothing is more motivating than an excited audience. ~ Like, excited in a good, non-pervy way. )
Scratch on!
Kirsche
There was more, is more, will be more!
Happy happy happy!
( Hey, nothing is more motivating than an excited audience. ~ Like, excited in a good, non-pervy way. )
Scratch on!
Kirsche
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah a bit cheesy, but nice too. I suppose your characters still have issues to deal with. I just hope whatever happen B&C won\'t loose theor trust in each other. They had painful experience with that in the past, so it would only mean more heartache.
Also, it is clear that Marcus still wantt o be friend with Cath and that she still cared for him. Is there any chance to see him again in a future chapter?
Also, it is clear that Marcus still wantt o be friend with Cath and that she still cared for him. Is there any chance to see him again in a future chapter?
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story, still. and yes, all is well at first in a relationship... but i think its time now to bring on the pain! great job, as always.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, good chapters. I, as well, love the cheese =), but I am looking forward to the angst. By the way, where did you get that line \"Stay gold, Ponyboy?\" Just wondering since it\'s the title of one of my fav songs by one of my fav bands. Update soon! I love this one as much as I loved your last one. Oh, and I hope that you really are considering re-writing \"Why Bother\" I was hooked and completely confused when you took it down. Keep it up, I love it!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!
But I love the chedder!!!
Update Soon.
Liz
But I love the chedder!!!
Update Soon.
Liz
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 and 13 was good. Sorry, I don\'t have anything else to comment on except keep up the good work. Thanks for updating.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very impressed with this work, and have been following it since it was released. I\'d like to commend you on your consistency of both plotline, character development (and let\'s not forget - updates too) all of which have been near-flawless so far. I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed following along to this and I await eager anticiaption to the next chapter and hopefully, you\'re next new piece of work; which I\'m sure I will follow with equal eagerness.
Keep up the good work. =D
Keep up the good work. =D
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job. I wonder how Ben will take it when he\'ll discover the truth.