rate_review Reviews

i vote no to a marcus spinoff!

oh good god this is too good. I\'m crying.

actually... i really hate marcus and i dont care that he\'s changed.

i think you should write new characters! move on. you did a good job leaving flame and leah and doing starting over; i personally would like a new set of characters.
i liked the chapter of marcus closing.
great job and cant wait for your next piece!

That was as good, if not better, than your last story. I especially like that whole part in Chapter 16 where you have Batey and Catherine making love as his parents are dealing with their issues. It perfectly condensed two scenes into one paragraph. Beautiful. Everything about this story shows that you are defintely growing as a writer. Keep it up, it was wonderful.

wow, another great story just like the first one you wrote. good character development & i will be looking forward to reading your spinoff with marcus(i luv the idea). keep writing!!

oohh! more drama please! have it come out about catherine and james\' little escapade! something!
the last bit of drama didnt last very long!
great story! update soon!

Does that mean it\'s over?
Wahh!!!!
>wished it would never end<
Oh well, it was yummy!

Can\'t wait for your next story!

I say, this is one of the top quality stories I\'ve read so far. IT\'s beautifully written and you can relate to so many of them. Kudos to Tirch for a great story!! ^^

You update quite often therefore thank you but I don’t get to check often due to schoolwork. I am reviewing chapters 14-17. It’s funny to read about the states I am familiar with and to actually see the name of the state that I live in. I actually go to an out of state university but I have to say that GW is so expensive. I like the cheesiness and the seriousness that you write about. You are making Marcus sounding good since he’s drug free. You have redeemed James and now I like him. You did a very good job in Chapter 16 when you went back and forth with the scenes between Batey/Catherine and Batey’s parents. I like your writing style because I can see similarities in this story and your other finished story that makes it say this is definitely a Tirch story yet both stories are different. Cheers for Emma and Eddie. I hope you like long reviews because I didn’t have anything to say the last time I reviewed chapters 12-13. Thanks.