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for Stepping Through The Stages

by CollapsedHrt

person audrav2
schedule September 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is a good  story!!! When is your  computer  going  to  be   fixed .  I'd like to know how the story goes .  

person audrav2
schedule July 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You can't   leave  it like that! Your killing  me ! 

person lovelyl
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad beginning. So are you going to finish this one? You should. :)
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did you never continue with this story, it was interesting and the writing is done well. You said you had the next chapter finished so why don't you post it? I really want to know what happens.
person Fogu-s_Tofu (not logged in)
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. very very good.
I hate your computer untill it starts liking you again, this story rocks!
person moonlight
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue updating, this story is fantastic, i love it.
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If its all finsihed where th h*** is it??
person Danielle
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic, its great. good job. i like how it is you play them as not wanting to show that other how they feel. i also love that little hint on his job. you could so much with that. you could have it to were she finds out and trys to get him to stop. you could put it from his point of view that he wants to but can\'t afford to do that. any who good job with the fic. i like.
person LilAngelBoy
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Very nice, must better then mine.very much better ^.^
person Tirch
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m totally addicted to this story. Please don\'t stop now!