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for The Cinder Girl's Eighteenth Birthday

by Jeanster

person dutchess67
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great and the ending was so cute!!!!!!!
person Supreme Ruler
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best erotic version of Cinderella I\'ve ever read! Fairy tales long ago had a dark theme, but some of us may have forgotten that due to the Disney versions. This is a refreshing hot spin on the classic.
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, that certainly was hte weird fairy tale i ever read! but it was good. those sick pigs got what they deserve in the end and the cinder girl got some great friends! no offense but gay men do make the ebst friends a girl can have ^^\' and if i offended anyone then plz forgive me. good fic, will you be writing more fiary tales as such?
person me ^^
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please...ASAP!!!
person chocolatesyrup
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!!!! i wanna know what happens next!!!! update update!!!!!!!!!!!! all that raping sounded really painful and now im a little like....ehg!! ok anyways update soon!!!!
person anon
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not your typical Cinderellastory...it\'s better...hurry and update
person Candace Caine
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amaria, you mean you\'ve experienced fucking for longer than twenty minutes before the guy climaxed? boy, do i feel deprived. and cheated. and missing out on some mighty great fucking. *pouts*
person Cealdia
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. Please write more...
person amaria
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ilike it althogh 20 mins stamina is not very long unless it was meant to be a joke?I still like it though.