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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Great characterization. Great dialogue. You manage to make your world believable and the characters three dimensional. I love Jenzi as the bad boy vamp, I\'m curious about his history. But I love them all. What I also love is the matter of fact element about Inochi being gay. It\'s just part of him not like THE part of him. You are a great writer and this story shows a lot of promise. I\'m looking forward to seeing more of this story!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story~ I love how you keep up the suspense. I was literally hanging on to everyword! It\'s good that you put a lot of detail into this story. It is a truely awesome story! Keep up the great work. I recommend you read this book: Cirdue Du Freak. It is a 9 book series of horror/suspense/romance(kind of)/ and vampires. The author is named: Darran Shan. I hope it helps!(not that you have to read it or anything, I\'m just recommening/ it is a truely amazing set of books!)
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not to sound mean or rude but....YOU ARE SUCK A BASTARD!!! J/k ^-^ I wouldn\'t know if you were bastard or not but please update soon!!!! I like your story a whole and the descriptions of their surroundings are very vivid! I enjoy reading it!!! *reads again....reads again, again* I just you update soon!!! YAY!!!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is proving to be most interesting. I love your approach to this \"evil vampire\" as bigotry not as how things are. I wish there were more stories like this. I can\'t wait for more!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, just proof read a little, and it will be better.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are evil. You stop it there? **sigh** it\'s well written, i hope you right more... plz
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story so please continue with it. I really like the use of \"usagi\" which means rabbit, ad i\'m wondering (mainly due to the names) will Inu be a uke or a seme?.......just wondeirng lol anyways i cant wait for the next chapter and also when is the hot sweaty man sex gonna happen? also will it happen between inu and jenzai(?) ?
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that was great write more now!!! ^^
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was unexpected. o-o;;
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great! I thought it was very well written. Good job!