rate_review Reviews

Oooh! Hehehe... He\'s not as nice as he seems. :) That was an unexpected development to me, but I like it. I like the changes you did. Wonder what\'ll happen next... Please do continue!

hmmmmmm...you may be right Pudding....I may take this chapter down and redo it. I was not really happy with it.

P.W.

Pretty good still, but I think it developed a little too fast. It might\'ve been better if you had drawn it out a little. However, it\'s your story, so you get to do with it as you want. Please continue, though!

i really like ur story, is there a reason why u havent updates it? i read a while ago and alwasy check on it. please upsate soon!

Oooh, looks like he hasn\'t given up yet! I thought the masturbation scene was done pretty good. I\'m really happy that you continued your work on this, so thank you. Please keep on going, though! I\'m curious as to what he\'ll do next. Maybe he could break and enter while she\'s home alone? It\'s just an idea for if you run out or something. Just keep on going, \'kay? I\'ll be waiting! :)

i love the story. i hope you keep on writing it, ill be reading!

Wow! Neat piece of writing! Please, I beg of you, continue! I especially like how you\'re setting it in a modern time. Great grammar and spelling, too. So, please, don\'t stop here on this piece. Please, as I\'ve said before, continue! :)