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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay...the fic is okay but i find it a bit sickening when hotaru\'s father n brother are lusting after her...ugh...hopefully her husband will do something to stop them from her hurting her n her son...by the looks of it, hotaru\'s husband is quite nice only has a bad temper..either way i am curoius to find out what will happen soon in the fic...keep up the good work n if u don\'t mind..could u inform me when u r going to update this fic..thanx..
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best story...cool
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Though the chapters are shortish, they are appropriate and make sense. So far I love it, though I can\'t figure out whether or not Hotaru will end up loving, and being loved by the demon.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story but remember capitalization is the key.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will there be a chapter 4 soon? I hope so!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You started out really well, I really want to read more!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* I believe in giving credit where it's due.
*ch 2* Ohhhhh...Chernebog (is that how you spelled it?) sounds scary as all hell!!! I'd be runnin!!!! Forget family, obligations and anything else that would stand in my way!! But, he does sound like he'll be plenty kinky ;) and a good virgin sex scene just happens to be one of my favorites!!!
Update soon PLEASE!!!!
Hugs
HJ
*ch 2* Ohhhhh...Chernebog (is that how you spelled it?) sounds scary as all hell!!! I'd be runnin!!!! Forget family, obligations and anything else that would stand in my way!! But, he does sound like he'll be plenty kinky ;) and a good virgin sex scene just happens to be one of my favorites!!!
Update soon PLEASE!!!!
Hugs
HJ
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Isn't Chavi Westwind from those
Tamora Pierce books? Anyway, I can't wait till your next chapter.
Till then,
Write on!
Tamora Pierce books? Anyway, I can't wait till your next chapter.
Till then,
Write on!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I like your first chapter and I hope you update soon cuz this fic is going to be awesome!