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for Lost Innocence

by YanffiT

person Kate
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! that was good!! Keep it up. I like! Ebony needs to kick tony's Pussy whipped A$$!!!!!
person royalredhead
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey gurl that was deep now where is the best friend and her Boyfriend to come and give this Mother the beating he desverves
person LT
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, the is so sad! I just hurt for her!

How old is she?

(shudder)

LT
person viz
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
You're not bad writer. It's just most people when they come to this site go strictly to the Erotica first. I know I do. LOl. Still, I thought this chapter was really good. Makes me kind of depressed too since I know of real mothers like the one described in this story. Bitches! Anyway, keep writing and don't worry over hits and reviews.
person YanffiT
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!
this storyis beyond thought provoking. the intensity of detail, emotion, and pain put into this, darlin i am sorry. i wish only that the basterds in this world who caoop oop to that get what they deserve (and mabey that i do some of the giving) i cannot wait to see how this story goes