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Wow, very informativemysemyself am a virgin, but sadly, also a female. Fuckin' genetics... Anyway, I intend to use your guide while writing one of my many yaoi fanfictions. I hope this is alright with you. I find that it is easier to write if you have first hand experience, but since I cannot achieve this, I will use yours. Thank you very much for the helpful guide. Later!

It's about damn time! Kudos not just for the subject matter, but your diplomacy in your presentation. I appreciate straightforwardness, and in this capacity, you have done very well. Kissing is a very nice starting-point,
I believe, and you've done the subject justice. (Nothing's worse than a dude who doesn't like kissing just because he doesn't know how or why.) Your commentary on blow jobs is nice. :) I, personally, would like to thank
you for pointing out the fact that the prostate is INSIDE the body, where many writers and whathaveyou are not aware of it. (If I read one more fic wherein some dude starts stroking his lover's prostate by fingering some
non-existent part of the external body, I'm gonna start leaving hateful reviews.) But since this reminded me, I'd like to be so bold and suggest some commentary on the subject of manual pleasure. Do NOT underestimate
the power of manual stimulation and others' inability to perform. (Sorry. I'm not telling you what to do, even if I'm sounding like it. I'm just sshosshole.) I shall look forward to further commentary, as I feel it is greatly
needed. Thanks and cheers,
azrael

Heh^^ Can't wait for next part *blush blush*

OOOOOOOOO Nothing new but a good refresher, keep them coming lol

Ohh! I love it! So much detail. This is good for me, because I am still trying to learn how to write a good m/m sex scene, and I am learning quite a bit from you!

Thank you! That is all I can say is thank you! And well done.

This is very good. I can't wait to see more! These are really useful and helpful tips. I have learned something from the first chapter already! Now I know what we were doing wrong that one time.

Dude, tis is great^^ I had fun reading^^ One thing tho: these tips apply to any gender, whether male or female, and I guess what I was expecting more of is something guy-ish XD... being a fangirl I am^^ *waves yaoi rulez flag* Ahem, I do hope you write more mov move further into the issue *hint hint* Love the openness and humor, keep em comin^^

I found your guide very appealing, I have started reading my partners expressions more, and we both have a really good time now, please post more of the guide it is a male/male relationships bible.

Hehehe, this is good...

I should pass this on to some certain writers whose work I've seen to be competely awful and utterly unbelievable.

Some people have just have no clue about gay sex, yet they have the nerve to write nothing but gay fanfiction.

I've actually seen some stories where they got right down to assfucking (sorry for such a crude term) right away without any peparation or any lube.. and they actually had the revicing end enjoy it.

and then I had to just write in my review that such a thing wasn't possible... enjoyable anal sex without any lube and stuff, whenever it be female or male... because to do such a thing totally unpreapared and just having them thust right into there would cause an newly torn hole, with a lot of bleeding, etc...

maybe you could write an section on that? for the sake of bad fanfiction writers out there...