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wow! thats all i can say.

you aren\'t wrong.

in poetry when there are metric forms and also free verse -- who can judge and not look a fool? it is elegant, reminiscent of Classic england, EBBrowning would be more short with words but youhave a gut tale to tell.

i know some guy and he fucked a girl who way did NOT want to be fucked. i confronted his friend and the denial was total, like \'you saw nothing\' was what he told me to say. i am making a novella of the experience...you aren\'t wrong.

uhh.......were u raped? and if u were its kool but, damn that shit was awesome. like if the girl was u, (if u r a girl) then kool

Wow...I usually don\'t like to read amateur poetry (not that you\'re an amateur, just that your\'re not famous or anything...I\'ll shut up now..), because it\'s usually trite and overly dramatic. But this is very, very good poetry. The feelings you convey are strong and the way you represent this girl is deep: How she didn\'t fall apart and still thinks about it, but instead of wanting to hurt or kill him, she wants to destroy him through exposure. There was a lot of emotion (wow, Im starting to sound a bt trite...) in this piece. Huzah and Kudos to you. :)

I wasn't a virgin when a similar thing happened to me but I can relate. My 'he' will never pay though. It's much too complicated. Good for you knowing you are stronger than the sum total of what was done against your desire and without your permission. I don't even have the courage to leave a name to this review because the shame is still so strong. Keep holding your head high. It gives me hope maybe I can one too too.

Wow! That\'s strong stuff and very well written. In fact so well written I can\'t tell if it\'s true or not. If it is, please get some counseling. A person wouldn\'t want to carry that with them through their entire life.