rate_review Reviews

Oh! Finally getting spanked, huh? I like this story! I, for one, will stick with it. Kinky type stuff is what I look for in a good slash story. And I can tell...this is going to become a really good story. Please more!

I loved it! It was so drama filled! I too hate needles. I hate when I have to get blood drawn. So I totally understand where he is coming from with this. More Please!

EEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeee! This looks like a great start to a horribly kinky story. I'm happy you managed to make it clear, they love each other, before you go into whatever it is you're going into. Ug, is it wrong that I think calling the seme 'daddy' is sexy? Yeah. Yeah it is. Anyway, this is really well done, you kept the whiney-ness of ukes to a bare minimum, with I applaud you for. If you need anybody to beta-test (not read, I suck at grammar) your chapters... .. *sparkle*

Is this just a one-shot, or will there be more chapters? I like the concept and it was well writen. I\'m looking forward to reading more things from you ^_^