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for Jilly's Diary

by Maddydoll

person GoldstormKaos
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I did have one idea tho...

You mentioned one girl did three kids in their class, why not have Jilly \"introduced\" to them. ^_~
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Fan-bloody-tastic! More mate, more.

However...ersoersonally disloike 12 year old stories, but.. goodness.. this one could change my mind!
person kiknikkin
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work....oO
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wicked :D I want some more pussy sucking
person jared
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person baka
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:Fans self: Oh my! You should definitely write more. I know I loved it.
person liz
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story keep it up i want to read more!!!!
person S.M.
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for more,please update as soon as possible
person kiknikkin
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those silly kids and their smutty ways...oO
person ash
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whatever you decide, it will be great. I like where you are going with it, and the implications from when she introduces herself, her bro\'s and her dog. so do keep going, I want to read more. lol!