Jilly's Diary
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
22,227
Reviews:
30
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Jilly's Diary
A/N: First fic here ever, please review. reader feedback/constructive criticism/input/suggestions ALWAYS welcome! On with the fic!
Oh, and there\'s some serious minor crap going on here, so if young people getting it on is not your thing, go back now!
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Dear Diary,
My name is Jilly, and I’m 12. All my friends have diaries, so I decided that I should have one too. I have two older brothers, Pete and Ryan, and a dog named Trigger. Trigger is a black lab. Dad wanted him to be a hunting dog, but we all just wanted a dog to play with. I live with my mom and dad in a big yellow house. My best friends are Lisa, Nicky, and Emily. I like dance classes, and I play the flute.
Today I was over at Nicky’s house, and Nicky said that we should try something. She said that we should practice for when we are older and have husbands. She said we need to practice how to make babies. She put on a tape that she had sneaked from her parents’ videos. There was this woman, and she wasn’t wearing any clothes. She showed her privates to the camera. Her legs were open real wide, and Nicky said that we should take off our clothes and do the same. So Nicky and I sat naked on the bed and spread our legs. Then a man came into the picture. He put his thing in her mouth, and she sucked on it! It was so gross! But the woman looked like she liked it, and the guy said he liked it too. Still, I don’t want to put someone’s thing in my mouth. Maybe I won’t have babies.
And then, he started sucking on her boobies! And Nicky said we should do the same thing to each other, so I sucked her boobs, and then she sucked mine. It actually felt really good. I liked it when Nicky sucked my boobs. My boobs are bigger than Nicky’s. Nicky said that she liked sucking my boobs, but that I should suck her boobs harder next time.
And then the man started kissing her privates, but the woman called them her pussy. Nicky said that you could also call a pussy a cunt. She asked me to suck her cunt like the man did. Nicky lay back on the bed, and I put my head between her legs. Her pussy was very pink and shiny. There was a little hole with a big sort of lip on one side and a little one on the other, and a little sort of nub above the hole. I asked Nicky where I should start, and she said to just kiss one part and she’d tell me where to go next. So I kissed the big lip next to her hole. Nicky shivered a bit and told me to keep going. So I started kissing and licking the big lip and the little one next to it. She tasted funny. Kind of sweet, but not really. It was good. Nicky kept moaning as I licked and kissed her cunt, as she called it. She told me to go higher, and I asked why. She said that it felt like that part of her would burst, so I did. I started licking her little nub. Nicky started screaming, and she yelled at me to suck her. I started sucking at her whole cunt and all these short little noises started coming out of Nicky’s mouth. Her legs wrapped around my head, and her whole body started shaking against my face. There was this big rush of wetness against my face, and Nicky was screaming “Drink my cum! I’m coming, Jilly!” I licked up all of the juice coming out of her cunt.
Nicky lay there for a bit. She was breathing really hard, and there was sweat all over her. Then she sat up and smiled, and she said that what I had done was awesome. Then she said she was going to do the same to me. So she pushed me back down on the bed, pushed my legs wide open and started licking me.
My whole body felt like it was on fire. The tingling in my boobs was so bad that I started pulling on them to make it better. But then the tingling in my pussy got worse. All I could think of was Nicky’s tongue on my pussy. I felt like it was swollen two feet big. I could hear my voice moaning and telling her to keep going, but I couldn’t stop myself. It all felt so good. Then she stopped, and before I could complain cause I knew somehow that it wasn’t finished, I heard her tell me she was gonna suck my clit, whatever that was, like that whore in the movie had done to her. And then I felt her do whatever she said she was going to, and I though I was going to die. I gripped the sheets hard, and my back arched. I pushed my cunt into her face and begged her to make whatever was happening end. She pushed her hand into my hole like the man on screen was doing, and I felt like I was breaking. I heard myself scream her name. My whole self felt like it was rushing towards her mouth and hand. It was the greatest thing in the whole world.
After I came- that’s what Nicky had called it- I felt like I had when I was sick with the flu, only perfectly healthy. My e woe world was just a daze. Nothing seemed to look right for a while. After a bit, I realized that Nicky was lying beside me. I could feel her small little boobs against me, and her breath tickled my ear. She asked me how it was, and I said that it was amazing. Nicky just smiled and said that Lisa and Emily had dared her to do it. She said that they did that to each other all the time, and that they wanted me to do it too. Then she kissed me, and I felt her tongue in my mouth. I tried to pull away, but she held my head against hers. I liked the tasted of her pussy better than her mouth. Her tongue felt and tasted funny, but it felt good at the same time. I wonder what it would be like to kiss other people that way.
At last Nicky pulled away and smiled. She said that she and Lisa and Emily knew a place behind the school where we could all get together during recess tomorrow, and we could practice on each other. I hope it’s like it was today, Diary! I can’t wait!
Sincerely
Jilly Price
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I based this off an experience I had when I was wicked young, but changed most of it. Mind, it was written extremely late at night, so if you notice errors, let me know and I’ll fix them! This was my first completed original smut fic, and I want to know what you think and how I can improve. I feel like I’ll do better when I get to the het parts, but let me know what you think! I want you all to be turned on, so give me some ideas about where you want this to go. From the summary you probably know what I’m thinking about, but your input will carry weight too! Review Review Review Star Star Star!!!!!
Oh, and there\'s some serious minor crap going on here, so if young people getting it on is not your thing, go back now!
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Dear Diary,
My name is Jilly, and I’m 12. All my friends have diaries, so I decided that I should have one too. I have two older brothers, Pete and Ryan, and a dog named Trigger. Trigger is a black lab. Dad wanted him to be a hunting dog, but we all just wanted a dog to play with. I live with my mom and dad in a big yellow house. My best friends are Lisa, Nicky, and Emily. I like dance classes, and I play the flute.
Today I was over at Nicky’s house, and Nicky said that we should try something. She said that we should practice for when we are older and have husbands. She said we need to practice how to make babies. She put on a tape that she had sneaked from her parents’ videos. There was this woman, and she wasn’t wearing any clothes. She showed her privates to the camera. Her legs were open real wide, and Nicky said that we should take off our clothes and do the same. So Nicky and I sat naked on the bed and spread our legs. Then a man came into the picture. He put his thing in her mouth, and she sucked on it! It was so gross! But the woman looked like she liked it, and the guy said he liked it too. Still, I don’t want to put someone’s thing in my mouth. Maybe I won’t have babies.
And then, he started sucking on her boobies! And Nicky said we should do the same thing to each other, so I sucked her boobs, and then she sucked mine. It actually felt really good. I liked it when Nicky sucked my boobs. My boobs are bigger than Nicky’s. Nicky said that she liked sucking my boobs, but that I should suck her boobs harder next time.
And then the man started kissing her privates, but the woman called them her pussy. Nicky said that you could also call a pussy a cunt. She asked me to suck her cunt like the man did. Nicky lay back on the bed, and I put my head between her legs. Her pussy was very pink and shiny. There was a little hole with a big sort of lip on one side and a little one on the other, and a little sort of nub above the hole. I asked Nicky where I should start, and she said to just kiss one part and she’d tell me where to go next. So I kissed the big lip next to her hole. Nicky shivered a bit and told me to keep going. So I started kissing and licking the big lip and the little one next to it. She tasted funny. Kind of sweet, but not really. It was good. Nicky kept moaning as I licked and kissed her cunt, as she called it. She told me to go higher, and I asked why. She said that it felt like that part of her would burst, so I did. I started licking her little nub. Nicky started screaming, and she yelled at me to suck her. I started sucking at her whole cunt and all these short little noises started coming out of Nicky’s mouth. Her legs wrapped around my head, and her whole body started shaking against my face. There was this big rush of wetness against my face, and Nicky was screaming “Drink my cum! I’m coming, Jilly!” I licked up all of the juice coming out of her cunt.
Nicky lay there for a bit. She was breathing really hard, and there was sweat all over her. Then she sat up and smiled, and she said that what I had done was awesome. Then she said she was going to do the same to me. So she pushed me back down on the bed, pushed my legs wide open and started licking me.
My whole body felt like it was on fire. The tingling in my boobs was so bad that I started pulling on them to make it better. But then the tingling in my pussy got worse. All I could think of was Nicky’s tongue on my pussy. I felt like it was swollen two feet big. I could hear my voice moaning and telling her to keep going, but I couldn’t stop myself. It all felt so good. Then she stopped, and before I could complain cause I knew somehow that it wasn’t finished, I heard her tell me she was gonna suck my clit, whatever that was, like that whore in the movie had done to her. And then I felt her do whatever she said she was going to, and I though I was going to die. I gripped the sheets hard, and my back arched. I pushed my cunt into her face and begged her to make whatever was happening end. She pushed her hand into my hole like the man on screen was doing, and I felt like I was breaking. I heard myself scream her name. My whole self felt like it was rushing towards her mouth and hand. It was the greatest thing in the whole world.
After I came- that’s what Nicky had called it- I felt like I had when I was sick with the flu, only perfectly healthy. My e woe world was just a daze. Nothing seemed to look right for a while. After a bit, I realized that Nicky was lying beside me. I could feel her small little boobs against me, and her breath tickled my ear. She asked me how it was, and I said that it was amazing. Nicky just smiled and said that Lisa and Emily had dared her to do it. She said that they did that to each other all the time, and that they wanted me to do it too. Then she kissed me, and I felt her tongue in my mouth. I tried to pull away, but she held my head against hers. I liked the tasted of her pussy better than her mouth. Her tongue felt and tasted funny, but it felt good at the same time. I wonder what it would be like to kiss other people that way.
At last Nicky pulled away and smiled. She said that she and Lisa and Emily knew a place behind the school where we could all get together during recess tomorrow, and we could practice on each other. I hope it’s like it was today, Diary! I can’t wait!
Sincerely
Jilly Price
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I based this off an experience I had when I was wicked young, but changed most of it. Mind, it was written extremely late at night, so if you notice errors, let me know and I’ll fix them! This was my first completed original smut fic, and I want to know what you think and how I can improve. I feel like I’ll do better when I get to the het parts, but let me know what you think! I want you all to be turned on, so give me some ideas about where you want this to go. From the summary you probably know what I’m thinking about, but your input will carry weight too! Review Review Review Star Star Star!!!!!