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My, that was a pretty intersting fairy tale you have going on. Write more. ;)

this is pretty good! update this a.s.a.p.!

i like it.

Damn it, it\'s getting more and more frustrating reviewing on this site. You write out a review, and when you hit the \"Review\" button, it more and more often comes up with that dreaded \"too many connections\" error and you loose your review. Grrrr! I\'ll try this again. The story is progressing nicely. I guess I\'m just finding it a wee bit difficult because you\'re taking it a lot more seriously than I did with my version, but that\'s just me. The formatting was out on chapter 4, but that can happen. I\'ve also still noticed spelling errors creeping in, so I assume you don\'t have a spell checker on whatever program you use. If you can\'t get access to a program with a spell checker then you might want to consider a beta reader perhaps. Either way, it\'sing ing along well so I hope you keep it up.

hmm... very interesting. please hurry and continue.

It\'s too early in the story to draw too many conclusions just yet, of course, but I\'m intrigued to see where you steer the story, and how it differs from my own Red Riding Hood story. I did pick up a few mistakes, though, so an extra proofread next time would be idea. I hope you keep it up! Oh, and think about perhaps moving your story to the Original/Fantasy section, like mine. It would almost certainly get more hits in that category.

The story is building up nicely so I hope you\'ll keep it up, and I\'m glad you updated!

This is great! I can\'t wait to see what you do next!