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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hidoi! where\'s the rest of it? you haven\'t updated in like forever
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, intriguing, clear p.o.v.\'s, solid characterizations. Will Nathan be so angry when he\'s realized what was done to him (and by him) that he goes after Kallias for revenge? Will Nathan become obsessed with Kallias? You write well.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, it just has a few mistakes in grammar. But I can\'t wait for the next chapter
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is hot! Please update soon. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. it\'s different because it\'s slash rather than hetero and i like it when new ideas come around... especially in original fiction. please continue
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo. i like it. it wasn\'t overly explicit, but it wasn\'t vague either. continue soon
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh. *wails* that\'s it? that means you haven\'t updated in awhile.... update, dammit, update! i wanna read more about Nathan and Kallias. *pouts* anyways, i like how Nathan tries to downplay the events so much, but even while he\'s doing so he\'s thinking about it himself.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good! hope you plan on writing more!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is realy cool, I hope you write more soon. Is the vampy going to come back for Nathan? That would be cool. ^__^
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! You have to update soon again! This plot is great!