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for The Sweet Caress of Lightning

by WriterLady1031

person Sarah
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was really good....Please update ASAP!!!
person Johannafulls
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good, but not the wondrous quality I'd expect from an English major.
Some of your phraseed eed to flow better. But a good beginning.
person Paranoid
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, do continue.

This is very well writen. Thank you for sharing.
person Nemesis
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the first chapter; hope it comes out soon.
person anonymoustip
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... very interesting start with this. I\'m curious to see where this goes! Keep it up!