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for Small-Town Murders

by gollumsgirl81

person Luinil_Telcontar
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I really liked this. It sets the foundation for something really great. The only advice I have is you might wanna have a beta look over it or check it yourself before posting it. There were a handful of typing and writing errors that made it difficult to understand. I promise, this isn't a flame, but I just wanted you to know that it's a bit difficult to get through at some parts.

Nila

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