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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a tease and I like it. Just like I like this story. Has romance, sexual tension and the right amount of smutty goodness. Keep up the good work.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. i love the friendship and the underlying passion between them. can\'t wait to read more, keep teasing its fun!!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have done a great job! Update soon. This may sound weird but me and my best friend actually act like that with eachother. Which is making me want to see how this story turns out even more.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITIN
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story... keep it going, seems like its just gettin some heat
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story seems to actually have a plot. Not like some stories here...anyway, cool first chapter.
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They are so cute!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a good start and i liked the set up of the relationship. please continue writing :)
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, very nice. The first chapter had a great set up and makes me eager top read more. Continue please. ^_^
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great 1st chapter! Please do continue it, I hate stories which are cliffies..