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for Emphereal

by citricacid2001

person Tiffy
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey SHI!!! erm, is this shi? ahahha... Oh wow! I never knew about the realm of fanfic networks!! I wonder if they have a SPONGEBOB network, ahahha... Okay shall not deviate. Is my writing good enough? I took extra care not to use sMs language miss english-the-original-way-please-no-buts-do-it-proper-mind-your-tenses. Heh. The poem was good, though I\'d like it if you included personification. Ah, always the riot with ryhmes. Your even better than I and THAT\'S saying something! haha, just being egoist I l I like your work dude, its got essence. Keep it going!
person BloodFairy
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now I\'m curious about this story, the begining is so sad and poetic... :)