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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter five and I'm loving it so far. There are very few stories that are written in first person that I enjoy, but I really am getting into this one. I like the humor you are using, it definitely brings more color to the story. :) I'll finish this story sometime soon and then I'll review again. Thanks for the great story.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just read the first chapter and I have so say I am completely at your mercy already. You've got such a fascinating set up, and I really can't wait to find out where you will end up taking it.
I'm really glad I started looking through some of the older stories in this section. Anyway, I'm gonna get back to reading your story, and I'll no doubt leave another review in a few chapters. :)
I'm really glad I started looking through some of the older stories in this section. Anyway, I'm gonna get back to reading your story, and I'll no doubt leave another review in a few chapters. :)
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far, I love the descriptiveness. I've already got a nice mental collection of some great quotes! :D
Even though there's not much established of the plot yet by chapter 3, I'm entriuged!
Even though there's not much established of the plot yet by chapter 3, I'm entriuged!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad that not many people have read and rated this story, it\'s really good..........! I love your writing the style...... keep up the excelent work........ twistid
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg this fic is the absolute BEST!!! sexy, adventurous, dramatic, EVERYTHING! i love it! omgoodness josh seemed like the sweetest guy =)...n leo wasnt bad either! wish u didn\'t leave things off about leo, sadie, cindy\'s dad n thor like that...cuz it just kinda ended like *snap*? hope u\'d do a sequel or sth...about 50yrs later? hahaha iuno =P anyway...this is the best story ever!! i\'ll look fwd to reading more of ur fics! =D
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good. well done. any chace of a sequal?
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I know it\'s probably a bit late, but i just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed reading this story. Great characters, great plot... the ending was a bit soft, but to me that just hints at sequel. sequel???? hope so. keep up the good work.... you\'ve got a talent for writing....
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely April. Very nice job!
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, premature hitting of the botton. Anyway - I enjoyed this. It was evocative of Neil Gaiman, Terry Brooks, and Clive Barker - in the best of all possible ways. Your protagonist was flawed and realistic, your antagonist (daddy) needed a swift kick in groin, and your work was populated with no real heroes, just a myriad of fallible antiheroes, which is a wonderfullewedewed tack to take. are are very talented!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh... it\'s over :( but you did update soon, so now I love you lol. BUT... shall there be a sequel???
oh, hopeful thinking but this was great! And a sequel would be fantastic! You have a talent for writing and so I think you should use that talen by making me happy and writing a sequel! lol
Hugz
Sarah
oh, hopeful thinking but this was great! And a sequel would be fantastic! You have a talent for writing and so I think you should use that talen by making me happy and writing a sequel! lol
Hugz
Sarah